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| JTBJAB | 2009.04.27 - 01:52PM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| Awesome chapter... although I really expected Hermione to kiss him when she first went to hug him. But that was just my over eager mind. If she'd done that Severus would have figured it all out (eventually) and then all your suspence would have been gone.
I'll attempt to be patient and wait for your next update :D Bring on update day!! Author's Response: LOL Hermione's not quite ready for something as definitive as that. Might have made things easier, though.... Ah, if only you readers could write the fic (but then it would indeed be over too soon). Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| Queen of Nightfever | 2009.04.26 - 04:36PM | 4: Three: The Classes | Signed |
| This is the most amazing, promising piece of fanfiction I've come across since Maya (Sarah Rees Brennan) finished Quality of Mercy and Drop Dead Gorgeous. It's incredible! I would love to just continue reading and reading, but I really have to stop for now and get back to work, miming Hermione's example, if you like. I will certainly get back to it asap. Thank you! Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much, and I appreciate that you've taken the time to review (and when I have the time, I'll have to check out those recs). ^_^ | |||
| DormeDwayne | 2009.04.26 - 05:01AM | 5: Four: The Research | Signed |
| I love it! The plot seems wonderful so far, but the style is unbelievable. The ''You've made some. Of course you have.'' made me laugh out loud - so very Hermione :)
Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Thank you; it's always lovely to hear from people who like my style along with my plot. :D I appreciate that you took the time to review. ^_^ | |||
| Moyra | 2009.04.24 - 06:06PM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| What a brilliant chap! I began it by taking a deep breath (you know, long built up anticipation and all that) – and then enjoyed the talk between H.& S. immensely. I am quite happy that all was only a big misunderstanding (didn’t see that one coming, I thought S. acted out of jealousy), and I’m relieved they are on very friendly speaking terms again. S. extracted quite a lot out of H.; though he doesn’t seem to suspect Remus as her secret love. Perhaps Draco? But I guess he knows about the preferences of his god-son. Sooo, what is his guess? Does he have some inkling after being so intensely hugged by H.? --- On another note, I’m quite happy that at least the relationship between D.&H. seems to go on to the next stage. Uh, they only kissed, yes? Harry’s still a Pure Adult, isn’t he? --- Loved the long talk between D.&Hermione, you’re rather skilled at writing dialogues. --- Many many thanks for this wonderful update, and also for the more than satisfying length. Have a good time with your next chap - no, no, I am not selfish at all ;)) Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Severus's motivations are often convoluted. ;) For a while, at least, Severus's suspicions will remain his own. Yes, Harry and Draco only kissed; sort of makes you wonder what'll happen to Harry when there's more, eh? ;) Sticking Hermione and Draco in a room together and seeing what happens is an interesting exercise. Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| Leraiv Snape | 2009.04.24 - 10:52AM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| Good, some advancement on all fronts...I'm very intrigued by this cure - I hope it works out for everyone. Interesting point about Moody teaching everyone's children - that's three Death Eaters that Dumbledore's hired, and only one of them was on his side. Not too good a record. And wouldn't it be funny if Hermione sleeps with Snape prior to Harry getting with Draco? Not that I think she will. Good chapter, can't wait for the next bit! Author's Response: LOL Yeah, I wonder about Albus sometimes. ;) Honestly, though, I think he had a very tough job and a great deal to try organise and manage. He's not perfect. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I appreciate, as always, the review. ^_^ | |||
| trulymadly | 2009.04.24 - 06:36AM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| Wonderful story , very good writing :-). I look forward to Thursdays. Congrats on Validated Author! Author's Response: I'm pleased that you're enjoying it (and I'm still very happy about the validated status, lol). Thanks for taking the time to review. ^_^ | |||
| Nessasnight | 2009.04.23 - 10:59PM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| Arhg, fucking internet fucked up and erased my perfectly long review. Anyhow, I'll try to re-write everything I had to say! I, like everyone else, was anticipating an argument between Hermione and Severus and was quite surprised, and glad actually, with what went through. I can't wait for the heat to hit it's culminating point though because the slow building up towards it is killing me. Like you poking your finger repeatedly in my eye. Soft enough to now do any damage but hard enough to be very uncomfortable. I loved how Harry whispered in Hermione's ear about the kiss and had much fun imaganing the many ways he could've had his encounter with Draco. Your chapter ending was also very funny! The first time I read your chapter I had to very first and missed a few lines but when I re-read it thoroughly to review, that particular ending scene with Draco and Hermione pleased me! When I see an e-mail from Sycophant Hex saying somone replied to my last review I squeel and go total hufflepuff on my inbox. You're still doing a ver good job writing this! So thank you :) I can't help but think Hermione isn't getting much action lately and that she's been watching more than anything else. I can't wait for it to stir all up again because of your wonderful words! It seems my review inspiration is over but I hope you know I really like your work :p Author's Response: Aww. I'm sorry about the internet; I've had it eat reviews of mine before, and I always recall the deleted one as being all sorts of brilliant that the new one isn't. But that's probably in my head, and your review here is certainly an expansive and lovely one--though my writing being likened to poking you repeatedly in the eye is perhaps a little funny to be taking as a compliment, LOL. I'm glad you liked the Draco/Hermione interaction; I find it very interesting to write since they *don't* fancy one another and come from completely different backgrounds. I go all Hufflepuffy when I see that there's a notice in my inbox that someone has posted a review to my fic, so I think we're about equal there. :D Hermione is pretty firmly determined *not* to reveal too much to Severus and risk having her heart stomped on, so she is definitely getting less action than Harry and Draco. But that can't last forever (or it would be a rather boring 400K, anyway ;) ). Thanks, as always, for taking the time to leave such a detailed review. ^_^ | |||
| chewbecca2001 | 2009.04.23 - 07:40PM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| OMG... this was fantastic!! I LOVE the banter between Draco and Hermione. And Harry after his kiss, had me laughing out load! I know a few girls who gushed like that after their first kiss'! LOL The best though... the hug between Hermione and Severus. I really loved that sweet moment. Brilliant job! Oh and I sent you a message, but I'm not sure if you recieved it. I love the scenes in the forest, with Hermione as a unicorn, I had the urge to draw... So, heres Hermione. I hope you like them! OH and if you'd like I'll send you the origionals!
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y209/chewbecca2001/Hermione001002.jpg
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y209/chewbecca2001/Hermione001003.jpg Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it; I like writing Hermione and Draco together (because while I can't ever see them as a couple, I enjoy seeing them interact). Harry just sort of lends himself to being lovestruck; he's spent so long thinking that he doesn't have a chance with Draco and then suddenly it's fallen in his lap. It seemed about time for the hug between Severus and Hermione, though that is not, naturally, the end of their problems. And I *love* the pics. Thank you so much. ^_^ | |||
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