Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| disapparator | 2009.11.02 - 08:31PM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| Storming out? He's almost 40!!! Ahh
Love! Must she tell him everything?
She could have left that bit of info out
of their conversation.....She seems a bit body conscious, He needs to communicate the concept that her appearance is just as pleasing to him as his to her. They are both emotionally hesitant. He just did her on the lab table... Can't they just quit with the drama? She's doing all the work to hold them together and he's training her to react to his needs. They have set up an emotionally repetative pattern here....Besides this happened four years ago the guy is F**ing Dead already so why ditch your girl for this? She has to constantly prove herself to him? She
blew his fantasy in the lab with her need to confess every little thing for fear of derailing the relationship because of HIS temper. She might as well get used to tiptoeing around his temper now. I'm not too thrilled with him right now. I am thrilled that you gave bonus chappies. Thanksss. I could write a ton more
but I'll just enjoy your story and see where you take us. I'm emotionally invested here. These two characters
are so interesting together on so many levels. Yours is a truly absorbing tale. I've been causing other fanfic readers to "jump ship" for this one. The consensus is good.
You're able to get converts. Rejoice in your literary power! |
| aurora borealis | 2009.11.02 - 04:03PM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| One of the few subjects on which Severus is irrational??? LOL, I would have said there were many! Actually, although Severus does, indeed, act irrationally when Sirius' name is mentioned, to me, in his own mind, he doesn't think he is irrational - he thinks he is completely justified in his behavior. And while I can sort of see how Severus might not have known how Sirius escaped, I wonder how Hermione's teachers could not have known that the "brightest witch of her age" was using a Time Turner? It seemed like teachers tended to brag about her progress - surely someone would have noticed she was taking two different classes that occured at the same time? . . .In any case, so much for relationship progress. . . . Severus is back to being a prat. At what point was Hermione supposed to tell him how Sirius escaped? If she thought about it at all, she probably assumed Dumbledore broke the news to him. And I am curious as to when he will pick up on, and how he will react to, Hermione's comment about hurting her "mate." |
| QuinnMom | 2009.11.02 - 02:19PM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| Such a lovely suprise to get a bonus chapter on Monday morning! |
| Nichalia | 2009.11.02 - 01:12AM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| Every chapter is incredibly gripping. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!! Hope you had a great Halloween! :D :D |
| Nerdlee | 2009.11.01 - 11:33PM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| You are absolutely glorious. If I didn't already have a most fantastic religion, I'd follow you as though you had just declared yourself a messenger of God. That sounds sacreligious as hell. But I can't think of a better way to tell you how pleased I am to have two freaking extra freaking chapters. Freaking. Thank you. They are glorious. I love your play with words. I love: As you like. And... As you say. No one else could quite pull it off.
~Mia |
| pragerr | 2009.11.01 - 11:27PM | 4: Three: The Classes | Signed |
| Wasn't at all sure where you were going with this, but your new material on Hogwarts in this chapter is brilliant! You've created a fic I'm now going to have to read all the way to the end to see what else you've done -- of course in addition to your story! |
| joots | 2009.11.01 - 11:00PM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| Once again absolutely amazing! Happy Halloween! Thanks for the bonus chapter- and an extra long one at that, yay!! |
| cassity282 | 2009.11.01 - 10:39PM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| wonderfull as always. it figurse he would react like that. i want to bonk him on the head!anyway i cant wait for more! |
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