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| chewbecca2001 | 2009.06.18 - 02:21AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| Ohh... this one was good!!! ... the total encounter with Pansy, and the slytherins joining the DA! I really hate to repeat my self, but I CANT wait to find out what going to happen next! LOL Top of my list of questions... is that Severus who grabbed her arm there at the end? Is there any kind of link between Pure adults and the person they lose their virginity to? Like, if Hermione was hurt, would Severus know? Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter and are looking forward to what's coming up next. You've got some good questions. :D Thanks, as always, for the review. ^_^ | |||
| agnes_grey | 2009.06.18 - 01:57AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| eek!! Author's Response: LOL ^_^ | |||
| reignaptolemy | 2009.06.18 - 01:23AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| Wonderful! I've been following you for a couple of months now and every Wednesday night at midnight I make an appointment with my computer for this! I think yours is one of the most canon-Snapes I've ever read on a fanfiction site. Thank you and can't wait until next Wednesday night! Author's Response: LOL I'm pleased that you find my fic worthy of a weekly appointment. :D Writing the fic at the length that it is, I really felt as though I had the room to write a canon Severus and still evolve to a point where a relationship with Hermione was possible (of course, it remains to be seen if my readers agree with me). I'm glad that you're enjoying yourself, and I appreciate that you've taken the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| buffyslayer | 2009.06.18 - 01:12AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| I've only started reading this tale 4 or 5 days ago, and am completely amazed by your talent and creativity. This story is planned and executed very well. So much detail in the characters' actions and thoughts suggests an extremely thorough job you've accomplished. I absolutely love this, and out of the hundreds that I've read (I have a LOT of free time and a lot of coffee) this is definitely in my Top 5 most favorite of any HP Fan Fiction site. Keep up the good work. As always, I'll be here sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for you to dangle more creative morsels of awesome-ness. Author's Response: *beams* I'm delighted that you think so highly of my fic and that you're enjoying it so much. There's plenty to come, and I certainly hope that you continue to find it awesome. :D Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. ^_^ | |||
| twylite | 2009.06.18 - 12:53AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| hmmmm. little severus already? Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| graenr | 2009.06.18 - 12:48AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| Another soothing chapter! And I've all kinds of lovely ideas about the ending, as well as a personal conviction that unicorns are NOT meant to be inanimate. Which perhaps leads to the confession I've been contemplating for a few weeks regarding my investment in these characters...I was searching for my daughter's unicorn (security toy) while calming my screeching 'bird boy' and suddenly wondered if I should instead be calling him 'Boybird'.
Your usual standards were upheld here, but I've not much specific to say other than I'm looking forward to next week. Author's Response: LOL I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and are theorizing about what it means for the future. And I'm delighted that my fic has wormed its way into your psyche. :D Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.06.18 - 12:28AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| Uh-oh. I'm really hoping Hermione wasn't damaged by her overly ambitious transformation attempt. One small phrase you might consider adjusting. It's in the 4th section up from the bottom, third paragraph up from the bottom in that section (line beginning, "Hermione was pretty sure that Luna would have gone with the flow..."). The phrase at the end of that line, "... they balanced one another out well," works best when referring to something between two people. If there are more individuals involved, the phrase "each other" is used. Just a suggestion. Your writing is nearly perfect, otherwise. Thanks for all of your hard work--and for updating so assiduously!
Author's Response: Thanks for the correction. It definitely makse more sense that way. :D Assiduous updates are something that I can promise. ^_^ I'm glad you're still enjoying the fic and thinking about what's coming up next. ^_^ | |||
| Nerdlee | 2009.06.18 - 12:21AM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| Le gasp! She's not perfect/ Yet somehow that translates to you being even moreso as a writer. You astound me. I have even come to love your cliffhanger. Truly. Because I have come to trust you. You are always on time as far as I have seen and when you are not, it's been because you were early. And you never dally around what we all wait breathlessly for either. Thank you for that. Even among my most favorite and coveted authors I don't feel that way. You have never let me down. Not once. Not in your technique, you schedule, your storyline, your grammar, your depth or intuition for plot. So, thank you.
~Mia Author's Response: Occasionally, even my Hermione has problems. ;) I'm delighted that the cliffhangers have grown on you and that you have come to trust me as an author. *beams at all the standards you feel I uphold* Thanks, sweetie. ^_^ | |||
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