Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| joots | 2009.08.06 - 12:24AM | 40: Thirty-Six: The Absence (Part Two) | Signed |
| Oh man. Okay, now that thats all set up. Man, I'm gunna be so mad if Severus is ungrateful. I mean, if he's rude and harsh etc. ugh. But I hope he's okay.... I can't wait to see what happens... and Hermione going by herself- eek! Can't wait! Glad you're doing better, and I hope your friend doesn't have be out for another six weeks! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.08.06 - 12:20AM | 40: Thirty-Six: The Absence (Part Two) | Signed |
| Wow, what a great pair of chapters! Ron is not my favorite character, but I think that even in canon he all too often is given short shrift. He WAS the first-year who was able to play the giant wizards' chessmen for Harry--and win, after all. When you wrote him as not only loyal to Hermione, but using his logic to believably support her, I loved it. You kept him from being a cartoon character. That in itself gives your story more depth and perspective that the usual two-dimensional 'moRonical' depiction would do. There is a reason the trio are such great friends; your characterization of Ron supports that. If only JKR had written more such moments herself! You write with great depth and insight, and it is a pleasure to read your work. Thank you. |
| Amr | 2009.08.06 - 12:00AM | 40: Thirty-Six: The Absence (Part Two) | Signed |
| Oh dear. Albus is ignored, you say, in the next chapter. He's not going to like that! But I'm glad Hermione is going to try to rescue Severus, and I hope the Malfoys are helpful. I hope she doesn't find Viktor holding Severus at want point when she gets there, even though that would probably make her feel much better about rejecting him. And I hope this isn't because of his (undiscussed with her) plan to let Voldemort know about the warding project, since that will make her feel especially guilty. But if he hasn't sold that information yet, I fear this is going to make him change his plans, assuming he survives. (Somehow I see that vial of unicorn blood coming into play soon.) The cure of the werewolves, and Hermione's plans for curing the rest are sensible. I hope they manage to cure the kids, too; that sounds tricky. Many thanks for the update. |
| Wand | 2009.08.05 - 11:42PM | 40: Thirty-Six: The Absence (Part Two) | Signed |
| I'm really hoping Victor wasn't involved in whatever happened to Severus. Good for Hermione, deciding to follow her instincts and find him. Great story! |
| Losumi | 2009.08.05 - 11:32PM | 40: Thirty-Six: The Absence (Part Two) | Signed |
| Awesome -- GOOD for Hermione to take the bull by the horns and go after her man. I've missed Severus, and somehow I doubt he'll be in a much better mood wherever he is, but I look forward to Hermione doing her thing to find him and keep him safe! |
| londonlupin | 2009.08.05 - 11:13PM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| my heart is crying for poor viktor. i know myself how hard it can be to turn a good man down and love somone who treats us poorly. i hope that severus is going to prove himself worthy soon because she's beginning to come off like as a masochist where he is concerned and she is far too strong for that |
| undertheumbrella | 2009.08.05 - 11:03PM | 40: Thirty-Six: The Absence (Part Two) | Signed |
| Whew, I missed the last few chapters, and caught up just now. As much as I don't like the drama queen Severus has become the last few chapters, I hope he's fine! And I really hope Viktor had nothing to do with this... |
| somebodyoranother | 2009.08.05 - 10:48PM | 39: Thirty-Six: The Absence (Part One) | Signed |
| *healing vibes* |
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