Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| holyflyingpig | 2011.09.02 - 08:56AM | 3: Two: The Plan | Signed |
| Severus would prefer her new room??!! Oooooh! Lots to be revealed I suspect! :) |
| HoppySKS | 2011.08.26 - 04:54PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| That was positively the best fic I have ever read, and I have read a fair few! The plot, details, character development, so well thought out. I thank you for this and look forward to reading more of your work! |
| ClayPotter | 2011.08.11 - 09:10PM | 24: Twenty-Three: The Invitation | Signed |
| I've been reading this over the past few days and I must say that this chapter made my blood boil. Don't get me wrong - I love the story and you're a good writer - but as a testament to your writing skills, I felt physical pain on Hermione's behalf by the end of it. I wanted to reach into my computer and strangle Severus Snape (and, like Hermione, I love him dearly).
Of course if it had been me, I would have told Severus how I felt first, and then added that if he didn't reciprocate my feelings I would wait for "Mr. Right," but she is so young and noble. I understand her reasoning. She probably figured she wouldn't get an honest response out of him anyway. I wonder if Fawks could help her read his moods and his sincerity... But I guess that would be like cheating.
Anyway, great job. I'm really enjoying this, but I was truly distressed after this chapter and felt compelled to leave a comment. |
| Tanachvil | 2011.08.05 - 11:20PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| You... You... You magnificent woman, you absolute delight of a writer, you wonderful, amazing storylteller!
This is the best potterverse novel I've ever read since the Canon.
This is... I don't know really what to say and I'd like to use the poor excuse that I'm italian and my english is failing me...
I've laughed, and cried, and I've stayed up until morning in front of the computer to read because I could not stop. (really, it's 5.20 in the morning right now)
This is one of the most amazing things I've aver read and I just want to thank you from the heart for sharing this with us.
This is a hell of a magical story, a proper incantation, something that should be published and read by so many people.
Thank you.
Thank you.
Thank you.
Oh, and for your map, I'm from Bologna, Italy.
I really hope you still read reviews sometimes, because I would really like you to have my gratefulness.
Thank you again for the magic.
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| Imai | 2011.08.03 - 10:33PM | 1: The Prologue | Signed |
| I read this on FF, then someone on Tumblr mentioned it, (But I didn't know it was the same one).....So, I'm reading it again!!!! |
| Tanachvil | 2011.08.01 - 11:07PM | 30: Twenty-Nine: The Journals | Signed |
| I've said this already but I'll say it again: I love your Hermione! The only think I didn't like was her way to order people around, like poor Remus. I understand why she did that, but I don't like it.
I like the storyline, nevertheless, and the way you are developing it.
I'm just curious about something... Why does everyone hate Dumbledore? In the 99%of the stories he is a bossy, mean, cruel old wizard with no respect for the other charcaters or worse.
Your Albus is not mean, but surely he is bossy and doesn't seem very smart. I'm really curious: why? ^__^
(I love him, I can't help it) |
| Tanachvil | 2011.08.01 - 12:02PM | 26: Twenty-Five: The Toast | Signed |
| I'm late in the game, but I *have* to tell you this story is amazing.
Knowing that you are also a Torchwood and Doctor Who fan makes me like you even more!
I love your tremendously in-character Severus, your kickass Hermione and your fantastic plot. The whole pure adult thing is really interesting and the bits of magic you keep inventing are chaining me to the screen.
Oh, and of course, you write so smoothly that one could think you are the lost twin of Her Highness JKR... Are you? ;) |
| instantnudeln | 2011.07.27 - 02:51PM | 57: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part Two) | Signed |
| You lost me somewhere in the middle of the 57th chapter. You have allready laid out the storyline so I´m sure i know how it ends. Its just terribly stuffed with inconsequentials an recurrences. Too much dwelling on the past to much reflection, to little interaction and progress.
Dont get me wrong, I loved this story from the start, read 16 hours a day because I couldnt get enough. There´s so much happening and a fair portion of suspense. The central theme is somewhat absurd but original, the dialogues and situations are incredible funny. Your detailed writing makes it all the more plausible but it gets too much as the story progesses. In the beginning the relationship between Harry and Hermione ist sheer perfection but gets more and more lopsided. Hermione and Snapes interactions/ his character is where the story falters entirely they´re implausible, unlikly and are getting more grotesque at the end. This story is in dire need of some heavy editing.
Overall a very good story
Thank you for your endeavour |
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