Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| tjturtle | 2010.02.14 - 05:51PM | 7: Six: The Response | Signed |
| I rarely review in the middle of a story, but I have to say that I really like your interpretation of everything. Typically in long stories like these I get impatient and start wondering "where's the romance? where's the sex??" but with this, it doesn't matter. I'm completely drawn into the world that you have created and i'll be damned but I'm ok with considering your world to be canon from here on! As for Hermione being a Mary Sue, I can see where that criticism comes from, but to be honest...JKR kind of makes Hermione a Mary Sue. It's hard not to make her one without destroying her character or only focusing on her tendency to be emotional. Hermione always figures everything out...that's her character. So I support your decisions and can't wait to finish this!!! |
| Willowr22 | 2010.02.13 - 10:54PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| You are an absolutely amazing writer. The depth of characterization was superb and from the first few chapters I was drawn in to the world you had so artistically created.
I have managed perhaps 10 hours of sleep over the past 4 days with the time in the between consumed by your story. I have read countless fan fictions across many fields - but your fic is the only one that has managed to capture the essence of the characters and draw the reader in without hope of escape until you decide when to let us go.
This has been superbly written and you are an absolute inspiration. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for allowing us the opportunity to become so fully a part of this world you created. |
| kathy1450 | 2010.02.09 - 03:52PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Really I can only say wow! That was one of the best fics I have ever read. You have excelent writing skills; controlling complex plot and characterisation efortlessly, and maintaining consistent pace over the course of an unusually long story. A very enjoyable read. |
| Piratecockers | 2010.02.07 - 05:36PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| May I say first of all, I very rarely give reviews, and I very rarely become obsessed with reading a story all the way through. I have to say it is my honor to have read this story, and I had to read it all the way through in one shot. Took me 2 days of straight reading and not sleeping but I managed it. Your vocabulary and descriptions made me feel as if I were present through the entire story and the ending was perfect. Thank you very much. |
| ann t | 2010.02.06 - 11:57PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| This has been a very enjoyable read. I think I've read it over 6 or 7 times now. Your epilogue ending from Andrew Stebbin's narrative was the perfect bookend. This story has the right amount of humor, action, angst, romance, and believable character growth, all told in a nice long package. I look forward to reading your next story! |
| SandyKinns | 2010.02.06 - 07:23AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| I loved this story. There was a point in the middle where there was so much conflict that I just wanted to kill you so Hermione and Severus could have some peace, but they worked through it after a LONG DREADFUL TIME PERIOD, and I forgave you because of how happy they became. I thought you handled both characters well. I especially liked how both Severus and Hermione had communication issues; it certainly made an interesting read. I was upset by how much they fought at first, but I was impressed by how you were able to work them into a functioning couple without changing the base of who each person is. Draco and Harry, while not a couple I usually support, were absolutly adorable in this. I loved it all.
Very beautiful story, beautiful ending, and I'll probably read it again someday if I want four days of my life to be completely taken over again. Thanks! |
| greengirl | 2010.02.03 - 11:23PM | 1: The Prologue | Signed |
| WOW! One of the best stories out there. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. Great character building. Cried at Hermione's rejection by Snape every time. I was caught up in a great story. Thank you! |
| DragonRose | 2010.02.03 - 01:48AM | 56: Fifty-One: The Questions (Part One) | Signed |
| Oh so good. I know I promised more reviews when i finished a set of chapters for the night but I got tired. :) Anyway, it took forEVER for her to just finally ask Severus. Why don't people ever talk?? Just misconception after misconception. Its enough to drive a person batty. Confound it all, I love it though! More tomorrow night.
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