Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| thesculptress | 2009.09.30 - 07:58PM | 50: Forty-Five: The Mousse (Part Two) | Signed |
| That... that actually looked like a *conversation*. That led to a *resolution*. Are Hermione and Severus feeling all right?
OK, seriously--brilliant, thank you, and I can't wait till next Thursday! |
| QuinnMom | 2009.09.30 - 07:57PM | 50: Forty-Five: The Mousse (Part Two) | Signed |
| YES!!!! |
| Ling | 2009.09.30 - 07:56PM | 50: Forty-Five: The Mousse (Part Two) | Signed |
| My dear, first of all, please forgive me, I haven't reviewed in ages, but I've been overseas and the internet here is crap. I just want you to know, I'm still loving it. |
| Sequana | 2009.09.30 - 05:40PM | 48: Forty-Four: The Friend | Signed |
| Seriously, how can two people with such incredible intelligence be so willfully stupid?! Still, I suppose it'll be worth the wait when they finally start reading from the same page... *crosses fingers and hopes that's much sooner rather than later* Really, though, wonderful chapter as always - I was nearly a week getting round to reading it because I've been ultra busy, so now I only have to wait until tomorrow for the next one! Yay! Thanks for writing! |
| Moyra | 2009.09.30 - 05:05PM | 48: Forty-Four: The Friend | Signed |
| How very heart-wrenching for Hermione to think the reason behind Severus' agreeing to sleep with her is his need for revenge on a Potter. Anyway, now the ball's in his court, but I'm afraid we will have to wait for him to play after the school year's finished – to even out the unbalance between them.
On another note, your plot with Tracey as a means to bring important intelligence to V. is very cunning. |
| jillygumdrop | 2009.09.29 - 12:04PM | 48: Forty-Four: The Friend | Signed |
| Can I ask....is it just me or does everyone want to bang both their heads together and after that slap (in an affectionate way) the author for being such a terrible tease?!
You should feel really bad (or really smug!). You dangle the possibility of them finally, maybe, possibly, getting together and then dash all our hopes with (what I really hope is) another misunderstanding. Can you not give them a break, they’ve suffered enough, poor things!!! Let them have their lemons I ask you!Can’t wait till Thursday, but then again I’ve been thinking that every week since I started reading your story.
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| abyt42 | 2009.09.28 - 09:06PM | 28: Twenty-Seven: The Transformations | Signed |
| I LOVE this story. As such, I found this sentence problematic: "Neville and Luna were willing to trust Hermione and Harry's judgement paired with Draco's overt behaviour in the nearly two months that he had been in the frequent company of Hermione and Draco."
I'm pretty sure the last "Draco" was supposed to be "Harry.".... and you did ask for editing feedback....
Sorry it's so belated. |
| joots | 2009.09.26 - 10:46PM | 48: Forty-Four: The Friend | Signed |
| You know... as upset as I am that they aren't speaking to each other at the moment again, I'm sort of happy it's *Hermione* who's mad, and Severus is the one who's going to need to do the explaining, lol. That was such a good scene- her "realization" of why she thought Severus would have taken the time to have her. Ah, it was so sad, and so wonderfully crafted! I absolutely love this story. Thank you so much! Can't wait for more :) |
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