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| Jesse | 2009.02.07 - 11:48AM | 6: Five: The First Move | Signed |
| I am really enjoying this story so far. I thought the unicorn thing was a little silly, but the rest is great so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Is there something in particular that you find silly about the unicorns? The magical Animagus form is sort of integral to the plot, so I'm curious to know if you're leery of the entire overarching idea, the way it was presented, or something else. The next chapter is in the queue ^_^ | |||
| nanook1844 | 2009.02.06 - 10:13PM | 1: The Prologue | Signed |
| Love this story! Leaves me waiting for more! Keep up the excellent work! Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review; not that I want to make my readers suffer, but it's great to know that you're anxious for more ;) . The next chapter is in the queue ^_^ | |||
| Haystacks | 2009.02.05 - 11:38PM | 6: Five: The First Move | Signed |
| I am enjoying this immensley. It is clever and fun. And though Hermione/Harry are a bit excessively perfect, I am enjoying the displays of Hermione's intelligence. Great job. I also like that they are not letting anyone push them around in terms of this "pure" stuff. Shows they are powerful enough to make their own decisions. I can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: LOL They are mature, Pure, clever, and trying really hard to win a war. It's just how they wrote themselves ^_^ . Thanks for taking the time to review. The next chapter is in the queue. | |||
| AmyLouise | 2009.02.05 - 10:55PM | 4: Three: The Classes | Signed |
| Great work describing all the spells and charms used by Harry and Hermione to ward their quarters, and I think the descriptions of their lessons are very well done, especially Tonks and DADA. You got me to thinking about whether Albus deliberately moved Severus to DADA in HBP, so that Harry would have the chance to study Potions after all. I'd never thought of that before, but it fits. Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that it worked for you. The two of them will spend a lot of time in their quarters discussing a lot of very sensitive information, so it seemed important to establish up front what they've done to safe-guard themselves. Since Tonks was the only new prof (out of canon), I felt I had some room to play with her without boring my audience ^_^ . Albus is a master manipulator, so everything he does having twelve reasons would not surprise me ;) . Thanks for taking the time to review. | |||
| vincablack | 2009.02.05 - 07:42PM | 6: Five: The First Move | Signed |
| Things that I look forward to finding out ? What will Harry's animangus be? Because while a white stag can be exepted as a magical creature his dad was a white stag creating a problem .Also im wondering ok yes Hermione will based on what site we are on end up with Snape BUT do's she think she love's some one ealse and her head is going to turn ?Interesting to contemplate. Love your evil Minister how far is he willing to go ? How are they going to get past screening ? On another note though I am a farm girl so a few facts that might come in handy most horses are broke to ride a 2 years old because at 2 they are big enuff to get on. Also a small or pony horse cross is about 13/14 hands average is about 16 .Tall would be 18 hands draft horses 20/24 hands I have been around 18 hand mare's they are HUGE. Im also wondering how the herd will react when Hermione is no longer pure will that be a problem for them? Can't wait for your next. Author's Response: Thanks for all the info about horses. About as much knowledge as I have was gleaned from wiki, so most of the time I try to stay away from the sorts of details that will potentially get me into trouble. Because unicorns live so much longer than horses, I've decided that they mature a little slower, and that's why Isaura can be two and still little. (That's my story, anyway ;) ). Thanks for letting me know what you're anxious to find out; it's great see what hooks readers respond to. Everything will be revealed, but you might have to wait a little while. I appreciate that you took the time to review. The next chapter is in the queue ^_^ | |||
| arianwen2 | 2009.02.05 - 06:53PM | 6: Five: The First Move | Signed |
| I knew it was only a matter of time before Scrimgeour resorted to underhanded measures to learn the identity of of such rare Pure Adults. God only knows what insanity he would come up with if he were to find out about Hermione and Harry. I love the twist with Hermione being an animagus unicorn ... it's a lucky thing too because it gives her extra protection being 'herd'. Fantastic update, I can't wait to see what comes next! Author's Response: Yeah, Hermione and Harry have a healthy bit of worry about what would happen if Scrimgeour found out about them; I enjoy comparing and contrasting the Ministry and Voldemort. Glad you liked the unicorn Animagus. Thanks for the continuing reviews. The next chapter is in the queue ^_^ | |||
| Linneh | 2009.02.05 - 05:50PM | 6: Five: The First Move | Signed |
| I'm enjoying your story! It's an intriguing plot you made up! I do have to say that I am put off but all the 'prose' as you call it ;) But I will definitely read the update! Author's Response: Maybe my style will grow on you? There's definitely a lot more of it to come... ;) Thanks for letting me know that the ideas are keeping you interested. The next chapter is in the queue ^_^ | |||
| verasuspense | 2009.02.05 - 12:18PM | 6: Five: The First Move | Signed |
| So, Harry and Hermione are going to have to get hold of somebody elses' blood samples, and submit them as their own. The problem is, how? They can't just ask any of their friends, because then that person would know, and even if they agreed to keep it a secret, they might be questioned under Veritaserum . (I wouldn't put anything past Scrimgeour, anymore than I would Voldemort ) Author's Response: It's pretty much a rock and a hard place when it comes to Scrimgeour, Voldemort, and the issue of Pure Adults. Hermione's plan to keep her and Harry safe should be further elucidated in the coming chapters. Thanks for taking the time to continue reviewing ^_^ | |||
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