Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| hiddden | 2009.08.02 - 04:52AM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| 3 in one week - wow! I didn't even notice until I went back to read the last one. |
| simulacrum | 2009.08.01 - 10:41PM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| oh, hermione! can't a girl catch a break? I feel so bad for her, though the plot continues to feel oh, so natural, and the characters true to themselves. I don't think that I've reviewed before, but I've been following this story the whole time. Well done!
I was so glad to see the extra chapters, thank you so much for making the effort! Having said that, these chapters weren't quite as pristine as usual; helping verbs were missing every so often, and tenses were occasionally off. I make these sorts of mistakes all of the time when I'm sleep deprived, so it's totally understandable. When RL gives you a break (ha! a break from RL?) you might want to look over these chapters again. |
| Saphira83 | 2009.08.01 - 10:40PM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Ta-ta again! Just had to leave a little review here also. Oh, how I would love for Viktor and Pansy to get together in the near future. I think they really suits each other. I sincerely hope that your joblife and other obligations treats you to a nice mini-holiday at a spa resort with relaxing massages and therapy so that you`ll be chippery and happy and ready for a new week! RL`s a bitch sometimes... I adore you as I think ALL of your fans does, and we all need our favourite author to be healthy and focused. So relax, take your time and come back to us when you feel that things settles a bit around you! :-) |
| orm irian | 2009.08.01 - 10:21PM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| Ya know, I'm really getting tired of Severus' emotional brutality. He's like an ape- beating his chest at every opportunity. It's like he's got only one setting. Can he become more three dimensional? |
| Saphira83 | 2009.08.01 - 10:19PM | 37: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part One) | Signed |
| I was soo happy when I saw the bonus chappies! Nowadays I`m saving up each weeks chappies for my night-shifts, so that I have something good to keep me awake :) So thank you yet again for an amazing read and further development in your wonderful, brilliant and exquisite story! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.08.01 - 09:35PM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Very well done. I appreciate the excellence of your story-telling abilities. Like everyone else (and poor Hermione), I am getting more frustrated and tired of Severus' assholery. Would it at least be possible to give us a Sev POV to reconcile his behavior with the normal feelings the rest of us have? I do hope you make it well worth our (and Hermione's) whiles when he finally allows himself to realize what he really HAS in Hermione. I look forward to your next chapter--thank you. |
| somebodyoranother | 2009.08.01 - 08:29PM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Poor Hermione. It's absolutly wretched when you have unrequited love then have to hurt someone who is actually emotionally available |
| curikitten | 2009.08.01 - 05:21PM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| A squee and an ow. That's what I've got for you right now. The squee is, obviously, for the super-long bonus chapter. Who doesn't love super-long bonus chapters? I never understand authors who apologize for making a chapter longer than usual. As though I'm really upset that there's more story? In any case, the ow is the sound Severus is making as I kick him. A lot. Hard. In tender places that will bruise easily. (I might be imagining that Severus is quite a bit smaller than I am so that I can be violent at him without him hurting me.) He's just getting worse. I'm sure that Voldy-Arse is being difficult to him and he's under a great deal of stress, etc., but I just don't care. He'd have less stress if he were nice to Hermione, because then he wouldn't have to have all those growly frowny things going on. And, well, I never was particularly attached to Viktor. I'm sure he's quite lovely, but he seems such a... boring person. (This may say more about my feelings about athletes than anything else.) |
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