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Reviews for The Problem with Purity

Jaegerin2009.02.19 - 01:46PM9: Eight: The ReportsSigned
Arghhhhh, what a cliffie! I am enjoying this so much; it is really well written and the plot is so intense. I like the way you add new dimensions to the characters (especially a certain potions master), but still keep them consistent with cannon. Looking forward to next Thurs.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing; I'm glad you're enjoying it. I really tried to balance between necessary exposition and action for this type of uber-novel fic, and since I'm sure not everyone agrees that I balanced well, it's nice to hear from readers who are still finding the fic compelling despite its length. Working with Hermione and Severus far more than is ever done in canon gives me the opportunity to stretch their characters in interesting ways ;) . The next chapter is on its way ^_^

IntoxicatedBeauty2009.02.19 - 10:18AM9: Eight: The ReportsSigned
I love this story so far! It's so detailed and eloquently written. Keep up the good work! I cannot wait until next Thursday!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. The next should be up by tomorrow ^_^

chewbecca20012009.02.19 - 02:32AM9: Eight: The ReportsSigned
AHHHHHH!!!! Damn! I cant wait a week!! I cant!! I think I'll go nutters! LOL GREAT chapter!

Author's Response: LOL Hope you're still in a fit state to read tomorrow's chapter ;) . Glad you enjoyed it even if it is driving you insane. Thanks again for the review ^_^

undertheumbrella2009.02.19 - 02:22AM9: Eight: The ReportsSigned
Can I say, that I absolutely love Hermione and Severus having an intense Lover's Quarrel when they're not even lovers yet? Genius. That was very well writ. Also, I think you should know that I actually count down the days to Thursday. A few more chapters, and I'll probably start marking it on my calendar haha. Don't let me down now :)

Author's Response: LOL I have a calendar that has the posting dates and chapters all marked so I can keep track of where I am, so I certainly can't cast stones at you ;) . I'm flattered that you're enjoying it so much. When I put Hermione and Severus in a room together and things get personal, sparks seem to fly no matter what state their relationship is in ^_^ . Thanks again for the review. The next chapter is in the queue.

vincablack2009.02.19 - 02:22AM9: Eight: The ReportsSigned
I remembered something I was going to tell you...I realize this is your story and I don't expect you to pay me any mind ...That said I was thinking wouldn't it be great if just for a quirk in your story you had Harry's anamangus be a lesser griffin lesser griffins being about house cat size ...I know I know but listen I just think it would be great because everyone expect's him to be everything and it would be so like life to hand you something down right embarrassing can you imagine the first time he had to let his friends see OH ouch course I have a picture of one that was green over yellow which is pretty but NOT your most manly plus being small and flight capable it has some really good point's and in truth it is really cool just not what you would expect . I just found a pic on line someone had drawn and it came to me how much a person could do with a piece like that so many way's you could use it .Everyone in my life thinks writing storys is a wast of time I have no one to share my ideas with please don't be offended .

Author's Response: LOL Well, you definitely won't hear from me that writing is a waste of time; I spend a *great deal* of my time doing it and think it's very worthwhile :D . I'm happy to hear other people's ideas, but since this story is complete and I'm just tweaking as I update, there's little that I'm likely to be able to add to this particular fic. I could *totally* see Harry being a lesser griffin in *some* fic, though, and I'm going to let it percolate round in my brain for later ^_^

vincablack2009.02.19 - 12:46AM9: Eight: The ReportsSigned
You realize that the waiting COULD possibly kill me? I could die and that would be on your head .Are you sure you can deal with that ? Your chapters are getting better and better as we go .Your jerk Snape was SOOO infuriating it was so right on the money .That is exactly the way he would act. Then you torcher us right at the end with the hunt for them begining . It's enuff to make your blood run cold they have to be scared out of there mind's . I would be.. What do these people think there gonna do when they find the pure adults? Do they think THERE going to make there choice's for them ? That's rape aaahhhhhhh...I would be freaking out ....I AM FREAKING OUT great chapter crule very crule but great..

Author's Response: LOL I would be very much saddened were you to die and the blame be laid at my door ;) . I'm trusting, however, that you will actually survive the suspense :P . I'm glad that your enjoyment of the fic is increasing. Severus really can be a total prat, and he doesn't react well in personal and emotional situations. And the Pure Adults are definitely in for an ... interesting time. Thanks, as always, for the review. The next chapter is in the queue ^_^

somebodyoranother2009.02.19 - 12:28AM9: Eight: The ReportsSigned
I've been enjoying this story & understand it will take a year to update. I'm a bit confused on the timeline of Hermione staying w/Snape, then w/Harry. It's also hard to figure out how ware Snape is of Hermione being there

Author's Response: Thanks for your understanding. Sorry about the confusion. Hermione is *remembering* the time when she took care of Severus at the end of sixth year while she is *currently* waiting to see if anything happens on Halloween night in her quarters with Harry. She spends the whole night with Harry while Severus is at the orphanage. He didn't know that either of them were having the vision, but he knows the sorts of events that Harry tends to have visions of, and so as soon as he gets back to Hogwarts, he comes to check on Harry. Hermione is the one who indicates that she knows the contents of Harry's vision, although Severus may suspect that Harry has spoken to her about it rather than her actually witnessing it all firsthand. Either way, he knows that she knows what happened. Hope this makes sense. Thanks again for reviewing ^_^

AmyLouise2009.02.18 - 11:09PM8: Seven: The ConsequencesSigned
The scene of the children dying was rather a shock after the long scenes of preparation that you've taken us through, and well written. And in one night, Hermione has now experienced for herself something of what both Severus and Harry have been going through, and it has ceased to be merely theory. A big step forward for her.

Author's Response: The event definitely involves her very personally in Harry's and Severus's particular (living) nightmares. I thought it was important to show her coping with reality and not just, as you say, all the theory. Thanks again for reviewing ^_^

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