Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| semperdumbledore | 2009.08.01 - 01:02AM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Wouldn't life be so much easier if she cared for Viktor and not Snape? I love your writing, and how well this story is plotted. I especially love that Hermione asks herself all the questions we've been asking; that was incredibly lovely to read. I just wish I could understand Snape. Why this cold, heartless anger to her? It's not right to call Hermione a Mudblood, but it's okay to call her a killer? And no apology. I was really hoping for that. And I'm glad that Hermione decided to move on from him because of that. He's no good for her. It's a shame she can't care for Viktor that way, and it's says something about Hermione that she won't try to pretend she's feeling something she's not. Personally, I think it would be a most fitting end if Snape confesses it does love her and Hermione tells him to stuff it. |
| iamtherealmaeverick | 2009.08.01 - 01:02AM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Yay! Surprise birthday chapter(s)! So on to comments: She honestly didn't see that one coming? Haha, yeah right. Denial! So now I can't wait to see what Victor's gonna do when he turns back to her. Ignore her and walk away or try to be the bigger man? Is she going to tell him about Severus? Sure, she is. Please? Haha, good stuff. Looking forward (as always) to more. Am feeling spoilt by the crazy updates. ~M |
| buffyslayer | 2009.08.01 - 12:56AM | 37: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part One) | Signed |
| I love birthday suprises, even if it's not even my birthday. Great chapter. |
| Nerdlee | 2009.08.01 - 12:54AM | 37: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part One) | Signed |
| Sometimes I will read a chapter of yours and have the most crazy desire to just kiss the hell out of you. But then I realise that that would be bad, as it would leave none for your story. And I love the hell out of it, so your lips are safe for now.
~Mia |
| KatCzar21 | 2009.08.01 - 12:42AM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Oh, bonus chapter(s)!! Yay! :'( I feel so bad for Hermione at the end of this chapter, i even got teary eyed. Poor girl! I really hope that Severus gets his act together soon. Good job, once again! |
| graenr | 2009.08.01 - 12:29AM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Ok, I'm up too late to be coherent but there will definitely be tears for Victor, Hermione and Severus when I reach bed. Draco's exasperation was endearing. Pansy is really quite likable of late. Hope you are getting enough sleep yourself. |
| Nessasnight | 2009.08.01 - 12:01AM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Severus is an arse, and you make me hate him so (but love you for making me actually feel something toward a character on paper, matter of speaking). Hermione at least got a good last word in before she left the office. I was really pleased with her answer. It stuck with me somehow. I had a nice image in my head for the scene when viktor stops the two girls from following Harry and Draco. I just like the way it was described. The fact that Draco went to talk to Pansy (and her answer) is nagging a bit at the back of my head though :p. My heart sank a bit when Viktor came around the second time... I think the chapter ended perfectly. I also think Hermione's breakdowns are really well timed with the beat of the story. This really is structured like a good book. All in all I liked this chapter, it went by at a good pace and I really loved (though it is heart-wrenching) the way it ended. On another more realistic note, hope everything goes well with your job. It's probably none of our business as most of us don't know you at all but as the author of this fic, your words kind of stick with us. When a new chapter is up it's like getting a hug from a friend after a little while of not seeing them. Most of the reviewers have been following this for a long time and your writing pattern and style has become familiar to us. So take care of yourself in RL, of your job and don't stress out :p we'll be here waiting. |
| Astrea | 2009.07.31 - 11:56PM | 38: Thirty-Five: The Declaration (Part Two) | Signed |
| Thank you for the bonus chapter, it is appreciated! Great story, really a pleasure to read. |
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