Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| graenr | 2009.09.03 - 08:24AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| I should have known as soon as the children were mentioned that there would be no Severus in this chapter, but I held out hope 'til the end. Of course, I'm fairly sure he won't be next chapter either, unless there's disaster, so we'll have to wait for detention on Monday night. However, the interactions with the children were wonderful. I adored the implications for Sophia's adoption. Back to Severus, now that there's no issue of Voldemort ripping info from his mind, I hope he makes enough peace with Hermione to be present at the full moon, as much for himself and old fears as for her. And, another potential moment I'd like to see if you ever get around to doing a companion piece from his viewpoint - Tonks' explaining his observation of some harm to Remus as being, er 'training', after what he said to Hermione...and exactly what that was. Including her differing opinion and also that no, Hermione would not have gone after anyone and everyone. |
| buffyslayer | 2009.09.03 - 08:05AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| I'm glad to hear you've had some R & R, and sorry to hear that RL has once again intruded upon you in the form of and 8 day straight work week. I am totally geeking out over your watch, that is so kick-ass. In other news, I am pleased to say that I am deilighted with this story, and am anxious for Sophia's transformation. Also, I am ppouting over the lack of SS/HG conversations/interactions. Can I please, please read something with them getting together again...I promise to be really good. |
| lady chrisitnad | 2009.09.03 - 07:26AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| I looooove this story. In too many stories, the authors tend to make Snape act a little too out of character towards Hermione. I really don't think he would treat her all that much differently than he treats anyone. He would probably treat her just a little worse in payback for her making him feel something for her! LOL! This story is one of my top two favs. The only problem is you don't update EVERY DAY!! |
| irrlicht_cgn | 2009.09.03 - 07:06AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| hi,
sorry for reading such an amount of your work before writing the first review... and then being impertinent enough to start with a critic right away. I do not intend being rude. First, I enjoy the story a lot, but during the last chapters I really begin to miss Severus' presence. I think the transformations very interesting but it has become some sort of the main string of the story and that's a bit too much focus, at least when it means to leave out any interaction with the Potionsmaster.
Further I'm surprised that everybody else seems to let HIM go away with all his actions towards Hermione. Okay, all of them are warning her, but nobody asks his point of view... I find that strange and hard to believe.
Rest of the story is fine and I'm looking very much forward to follow through up to the (happy or bitter) end. Best regards from Germany
*irrlicht |
| Jaya | 2009.09.03 - 07:02AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| Oh dear. :/ I really need to know what happens with Sophia. <3 |
| DormeDwayne | 2009.09.03 - 05:39AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| Oh dear.... don't leave me in suspense till next Thursday, please! What happens to Sophia? I really hope the transformations succeed. You've almost made me forget Severus with this cliffhanger. I've been meaning to throw a tantrum for more Severus time but now I'm more interested in the werewolves :D |
| Cybrokat | 2009.09.03 - 05:09AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| Tonks laughed softly, observing, "You know exactly you're doing."
Should be 'what you're doing', yes? And..no Snape. =( I miss him. And I think he misses Hermione. Because yay wolves, and Remus is a turd but the plot point I really care about in this is Snape and Hermione and bringing down the wards. |
| grizelda | 2009.09.03 - 04:50AM | 44: Forty: The Second Trial | Signed |
| ARRGH! you...you... evil, heatless wench ! Still no Severus! Why no Severus? I've been on absolute tenderhooks all this last week waiting for the big showdown (or at least some mild fratching) between the two of them and I'm still left waiting until next week. NO!
Please, please, please can there be at least a whisper of Snape next week because quite frankly I don't care about ickle werelings, no matter how cute they may be.
*end rant*
Anyway, now I've released all my frustration I'd better go back and read it again so I can give you a logical, constructive review on what is, in all likelyhood a brilliant piece of writing.
P.S. I'm still really, really miffed :( |
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