Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| roosickle | 2009.12.31 - 12:32AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| well, here we are at the end, nad strangley enough, I'm crying :( it's sad for me to see it end so I can only imagine how it is to you. Thank you for a wonderful story and an adventure that will always have aplace in my heart. Finally some one has given Snape the depth of character , adn the happinesshe deserves. Thank you again. |
| Irish_Angel | 2009.12.31 - 12:26AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Lovely yet again! Sad to see it end but Glad everything worked out for all our heroes. Thanks for sharing your imagination with us! |
| kap319 | 2009.12.31 - 12:22AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Fantastic! I look forward to reading it again in the future. |
| Shiro Ryu | 2009.12.31 - 12:12AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| This was an absolutely lovely story! Thank you very much for sharing it with all of us. I am thinking that now that it is done I will have to re-read it it from start to finish in one go (well maybe over one weekend...lol). You did a great job and I look forward to reading anything you decide to present in the future. |
| Freyalyn | 2009.12.31 - 12:10AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Fabulous! Thank you so much for sharing this with us all, it's quite the best Hermione/Severus I've read for ages and ages. Much appreciated, and beautifully written and plotted. Unicorns are always a good idea. |
| FatalaniSnape | 2009.12.31 - 12:01AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| This has been my favorite story, and i'm sad it's over. it's been something to look forward to every week. I am a little disappointed in the ending. I'm not feeling the closure that i expected. but over all it's still an amazing story. |
| Cybrokat | 2009.12.30 - 11:49PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Well, I've reviewed every chapter since I started reading, but as far as looking over the whole fic, here goes. Things I did not like: Waiting a full week. Fine for osme fics, but as long as this, I honestly have no recollection of entire chapters because I read then 6 months ago and I'm not rereading for every new chapter. Hermione - way to perfect. Pure or not, she is still human, right? This fic could have really used a beta. Your grammar and plot line are good but many things were unneeded and often repeated. For example, we didn't need to see the full werewolf potion trial each and every month. Also, an uber-long fic is superb, but I felt like part of the art of your writing was lost to quantity. I find I can't proffer favorite quotes like I can for most of my fav. fics because much of this was just telling a wonderful plotline, not so much the great one liners or description. And I, personally, would have loved to learn more about what specifically was contained in Solace's journals. That part was really interesting. Things I like:Harry/Draco. Perhaps not quite as much as we saw them, but I loved the humor and love in the couple. Draco makes a fabulous gay guy. The many interwoven plot points. I'm impressed you didn't forget your own continuity. Your writing is clear and very detailed. I enjoyed the castle and it's personality, as well as the other OC's you introduced, and you coming full circle to Stebbins, but some closure on Pure Adults would have been nice. Did Tonks/Lupin adopt the girl? Overall, this was a fun tale to read, and a fun part of Thursday. I hope you get another little plot bunny gone wild! 8/10 |
| TheSlytherinQueen | 2009.12.30 - 11:48PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Oh my goodness, I can't believe it's over. This will forever and always be my favorite fanfiction story. It just amazes me how wonderful it is and I am so grateful that I found this story. I have read most of it 3 times and I know tomorrow I will be reading it all over again. I'm very sad that it is over but I hope you will be writing another story soon. I'll be checking!
It would also be cool if you took some of the chapters and wrote it in Severus's p.o.v. wouldn't that be really fun?! i think its a great idea ;)
You are so talented and I can't wait for wait you give us next.
Cheers! |
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