Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| DormeDwayne | 2009.10.15 - 04:49AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Well done! I'm glad to see you can write relationship just as brilliantly as you can write falling in love. Your Hermione is a wonderful character! But how COULD she leave the mousse?! :) |
| She wolf | 2009.10.15 - 03:23AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Glad to see Hermione is capable of actually getting mad at him. Yes, I know the poor soul has had a shitty childhood, been shunted around, etc. but I really don't think it's healthy for Hermione to keep bending over backwards to accommodate his hissy fits. Partner or not, I find the contradiction of her being a strong, capable woman, running all those projects, and her letting him lead her on a round about uncomfortable to say the least. I'd like to see her having a really good rant at him about the fact that she's the only one that communicates in the relationship. |
| Sampdoria | 2009.10.15 - 02:59AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| I was hoping that there would at last be a Severus I would want Hermione to be with, but once again the scale have tipped into the direction of Hermione being better off without him. The relationship is way to onesided to actually work, it is Severus way or no way at all, and while Hermione is in love with him now (and way to acceptable of his diffecult nature), she will mature and want and expect more equality (at least I hope so),and trust between herself and her partner. Hermione migth still have some growing up to do, but at least she has the excuse of youth and a possibility to do so, for Severus it is obviously to late. If the shoe had been on the other foot; Hermione turning down Severus sexual advances, he would never, ever have forgiven or forgot. I must once again admit that I am deeply dissepointed in his character, a dissepointment that will only be increased if Hermione put the blame on herself and once again forgive him for being a complete and utter idiot. |
| princessgraciemix3 | 2009.10.15 - 02:43AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Oh drat that man! "In the near future" you say? Does that mean sooner than next Thursday? |
| Cybrokat | 2009.10.15 - 02:36AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| loving the angst! Get over you two! =) |
| lady chrisitnad | 2009.10.15 - 01:49AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Poor Hermione. Is it just me or does Severus manage to muck things up between the two of them every time its time to brew the Weresbane? Maybe its on purpose so that he can truethfully tell Moldypants that he is not on good enough terms to learn the recipe.
Great story though, Severus is very Canon prickly pear that he is. I spend my week counting down to Thrusdays so that I can read the latest update! lol |
| crystalclear | 2009.10.15 - 01:47AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| I take it back... Severus is an idiot. But I think we all knew that, deep down. Maybe Hermione could make her point by attacking certain, ahem, areas when she duels with Severus so he, you know, gets the point. And I'm sure he knew he was in trouble the minute she rejected his mousse. Burn! Love the story, and I can't wait until next week!
~Loves!~ |
| Mercy Ruth | 2009.10.15 - 01:19AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Oh, poor Hermione. And poor Severus. It never occurred to the girl that being asked to submit is not erotically appealing to the man with two masters. And now Severus is probably convinced that she's turned against him because he didn't want to submit. Oh dear, oh dear. |
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