Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| aurora borealis | 2009.07.23 - 08:25PM | 35: Thirty-Three: The Conversation | Signed |
| I am very behind in my reviewing, so this is from a few chapters back, but I would haved LOVED to see Castina charging into Hogwarts to give Severus a piece of her mind! Glad to see the eclipse of Mature Ron was brief and I am enjoying the development of Pansy as a character - she is a good foil for Hermione. The whole Weresbane process is intriguing - your imagination in linking an animagus transformation to the cure is amazing. It never would have occurred to me that Viktor might be spying on the brewing process until I read some of the other reviews . . . .of course, I didn't pick up on the innuendo in the flying conversation either, until the characters pointed it ou! |
| chewbecca2001 | 2009.07.23 - 07:49PM | 35: Thirty-Three: The Conversation | Signed |
| Hahah... just read your answer to my review of the last chapter. Just had to review this chapter again so I could say... Shiny! ;) |
| Pixie Dust | 2009.07.23 - 07:08PM | 35: Thirty-Three: The Conversation | Signed |
| I didn't even know it was Thursday! What a plesant suprise! :)
Hope to see some more SS/HG action soon! It's nice to see him put in his place, but don't you think he is getting curious about the potion?! ;)
Loved the chapter, as always. |
| Avelynn Tame | 2009.07.23 - 03:56PM | 35: Thirty-Three: The Conversation | Signed |
| Once again, I couldn't postpone reading this until Friday (I couldn't bear to). I've been really busy this week and didn't realise that it was Thursday until this morning. Naturally, I was thrilled to come home to a new chapter - and what a chapter! The Viktor/Hermione flying conversation and its consequences was deeply amusing, not to mention Severus's reaction. If only he'd asked instead of assuming (somehow, I get the feeling that he is more prone to making these assumptions when it concerns Hermione...). Also - you should be proud of me! When they had their little conversation in the hallway, I made a concerted effort not to hope for any snogging or shagging. I've decided to suppress the hope so that when (or if?) it does happen, it will be a pleasant surprise. Also, I've decided that I really like your version of Pansy. It seems like she and Hermione could get to be good friends. Can't wait for the next installment! Seven days never seemed so long... |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.07.23 - 12:33PM | 35: Thirty-Three: The Conversation | Signed |
| Fine chapter! A typo to clear up: "She smiled a fierce smile. "When Albus asks me to explain, I'll be only TOO happy to do so."
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| ciel | 2009.07.23 - 12:01PM | 35: Thirty-Three: The Conversation | Signed |
| Forgive me for my time-(com)pressed review and my taking a leaf out of the Severus Book of Imperiousness ... but ... there's absolutely no way I can wait until next Thursday, so early update please!! Loved the jealousy scene, but I just have to wonder how two people that intelligent can be so inconceivably thick?? Rather, Snape is being thick, and Hermione's being blind. Egal, let the next bout of writing commence! (Sorry for absolute abscence of constructive criticism) |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.07.23 - 11:59AM | 34: Thirty-Two: The Meetings (Part Two) | Signed |
| My very lines from this chapter: "Harry Potter has a disease," Draco jumped in. "It's called 'open mouth, insert foot'. He's suffered from it for years and years, and just when we think we've got it under control, it flares up suddenly and violently like this. I'll make sure he starts taking his potions again."
Too funny! |
| verasuspense | 2009.07.23 - 11:37AM | 35: Thirty-Three: The Conversation | Signed |
| Viktor Krum is usually portrayed as a dumb jock, but I don't think a stupid person would have been Durmstrang's TriWizard Champion. He made it to the final round, remember. On the other hand, since he did attend Durmstrang, and he's a pureblood, there is always the suspicion that he's a secret DeathEater. Still, I think two Pure Adults would be able to see through him if that was the case. |
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