Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| crystalclear | 2009.08.12 - 10:43PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| Hooray, an update! Wow, this chapter was intense. I loved all of it, especially the castle taking care of Hermione.
And I baked a cake today... in honor of the update!
(Well, not really, I just baked a cake, but I've been trying to find justification for it all day... a cousin's birthday halfway across the country and a chapter update seem good enough reasons for me!)
~Loves!~ |
| Liadan Saoirse | 2009.08.12 - 10:40PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| I'm with Rossanne. My reaction was along the lines of, "arrgh, no, not a whole week! That was over too fast." I keep checking all day Wednesdays in case there are updates early. It's actually kinda pathetic. lol
Gotta give you credit: You are so good with the cliffhangers that you're evil.
PS for added not-very-helpful flattery: I've read this story twice so far. I like that there are things you only notice the second go 'round. |
| Wand | 2009.08.12 - 10:26PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| By the end, I was literally crying for Hermione. How heartbreaking that she risked everything to save Severus and he wants to kill her? And facing not only his rage, but everyone else's while still being magically and emotionally exhausted. I don't blame her for deciding to run. But if Voldemort knows or finds out who was behind everything that just happened... yikes! |
| semperdumbledore | 2009.08.12 - 10:25PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| Wow. What an evil way to end this chapter. This post was really well done though. The way you logically described Hermione going in and getting Severus was well-thought out and it was very revealing to see the after effects.
I think that everyone has gotten used to seeing this magically strong Hermione that they forget her weaknesses. It was a huge oversight on both Harry and Draco's parts knowing how much she cares for Severus; and yet barrelling into her. And Remus! This is just no justification for him at all. If anything, to this day, Hermione should be able to do no wrong for him considering all she's done for him.
Okay. Now, Severus. Oh, dear. She saves his life and he wants to kill her. Okay, is it that she saves his life and he wants to kill her for being foolish? And I just don't get his remark that after the offer, etc. He was the one who pushed her away. And I think if we don't get any further explaination soon for his behavior, Hermione will just have to let him go. (I'd let that foolish man out my sight along time ago. Then again, I'm not Hermione.) Good post, and will look forward to the next one; same time, same place. |
| Nerdlee | 2009.08.12 - 10:18PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| I have to hand it to you yet again. No one does cliff hangers like you do. You break my heart, love. You write it right out of me.
~Mia |
| apples123456 | 2009.08.12 - 10:17PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| i think my heart just broke for hermione. |
| apples123456 | 2009.08.12 - 10:17PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| i think my heart just broke for hermione. |
| hallowsnape | 2009.08.12 - 10:17PM | 41: Thirty-Seven: The Mission | Signed |
| I am wiping away the tears that this chapter has created in my eyes. I LOVE IT! And also hate that it has ended, couldn't you post it as soon as it's ready instead of next Thursday? Sigh. Excellent as ever! |
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