Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| ChocolateGum | 2012.07.29 - 02:50PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Great, really great story!!! |
| DistinctVagueness | 2012.07.25 - 06:29PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Just as wonderful on a second read :) -DV |
| crweber25 | 2012.07.16 - 09:38AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Spectacular. |
| Floor | 2012.07.06 - 07:00AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| What an amazing story. I have enjoyed reading this very much. Although very lengthly, it did not bored me one second. Loved the story lines.
Thank you! |
| devsgma | 2012.07.04 - 09:11PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| You have a beautiful writing style, good plotting ability and the tenacity to bring it all together in a very wonderful story. I have only one complaint. I think I would have liked your Hermione a bit more if she'd been a little less "Super" Hermione, because honestly—there was no suspense involved when she was attempting anything. There was no question that she was going to succeed at whatever she attempted, and that made me skim-read quite a few things. |
| beanniesalsa07 | 2012.07.02 - 08:48AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| This is my second read if this story, I bawled like a baby! |
| Bjornsdotter | 2012.07.01 - 01:26PM | 6: Five: The First Move | Signed |
| What a surprise to see that you used the name Berit. That's was my grandmother's name and it's my daughter's name. Don't come across that very often...
Enjoying the story, thanks for sharing! |
| SpSt | 2012.06.06 - 10:17PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| This story has been on my to-read list for ages and ages. I am so glad I finally had the time to devote to your wonderful fic.
The progression of the plot and character development was one of the best I have seen on this ship (and I've been around here for quite some time). You have a similar style to "The Twenty" by Lenya Rountree, as well as "The Apprentice and the Necromancer" (I forget who by). Both fics took the time to lay out a well-formulated central plot line, mixed with plausible and logical character development. I know there are some in HP fanfic who use Ron as cannon fodder, and absolutely hate him. I found the way you wrote him to be very believable to the true Ron, as written by JKR. I really enjoyed the manner in which you brought Draco onto the "good side". In an idea world for me, gay or straight, I think Draco would have been fast friends with the Trio if given a real opportunity and a bit of open mindedness, as you demonstrated.
The only drawback I had was the insane amount of tea these characters drank--and with so few bathroom breaks. I believe there was one point where Hermione was offered and drank 4 or 5 sittings of tea in one evening. Her parents the dentists would disapprove. I'm a British Canadian, and man, do we love our tea, but there is a line before your teeth are yellow and you develop a stomach problem :)
Otherwise from my tea nitpicking, I obviously loved it. I'll be sure to add you to my author alerts and carefully fanfic stalk you for new stories and updates. Thanks again for a wonderful story. I know this was a huge undertaking, and it really comes across as a labour of love.
Well done! 11/10! |
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