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| Nerdlee | 2009.04.23 - 12:04AM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| After reading the much awaited confrontation I felt like saying, "Now was that so horrible?" in a really condescending voice to someone. I really love this chapter. I love the dancing. I love that I didn't make the connection myself as to why Snape thought she had stopped calling him Severus. I love the Kiss and the fondness developing between Draco and Hermione. I love the Eww hetero sex. I love it I love it I do. Beautiful as usual. Which is quite an unusual thing to find, I think. Thank you for sharing your brilliance.
~Mia Author's Response: LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed it. If only you could sit down with Severus and Hermione, I'm sure you could get the two of them straightened out in short order. ;) Severus's motivations are often ... complicated. Draco and Hermione can't ever be romantically involved (in my head, anyway), but I really like seeing what can be made of them as friends. Thanks for such a lovely review (again). ^_^ | |||
| Rebelipuff | 2009.04.23 - 12:02AM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| Fantastic as usual. I too am thrilled that your chapters will be posted without delay. I always get impatient, try to find them on fanfiction.net and spend an hour cursing their search bar before I think of Google.
Yay Weresbane next week! Author's Response: LOL I'm glad that you will be able to settle here happily and not have to suffer through any horrid search bars. Thanks for taking the time to review. ^_^ | |||
| Snarkykitty824 | 2009.04.23 - 12:01AM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| Just one small, nit-picky bit that sexaddict missed: "Your doing them..." when Hermione is talking to Snape changes to "You're doing them". This is number one on my favorite fanfics list; you put so much effort and detail into the story and I love, love, love it! Can't wait until next Thursday! Thanks for writing such a fantastic piece.
~SK824~ Author's Response: I'm glad you brought this one up; I actually meant the phrase as a sentence fragment where Hermione is talking about "his doing them...", but as soon as you pointed it out, I realized how easy it was to misread as a proper sentence with the wrong your. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so much, and I appreciate that you took the time to review. ^_^ | |||
| sexaddict | 2009.04.22 - 11:39PM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| Found a few typos. Nothing big but I figured I'd let you know. Loving your story, btw.
1. "...it turns out he didn't really uninvited me, but we're not going to talk about that..."
~simply change to univite~
2. "....that he was keeping on track and stressed the fact that it was important that he learnt the topic carefully and well."
~reads better as 'learn'~
3. ".....around without wands but thought it "barbaric". When Hermione had Summoned his wand...."
~ "...around without wands but thought it "barbaric" when Hermione had summoned his wand..."~
4. "....then she declared her mischief managed before she was tempting to watch them until they returned."
~simple change from tempting to tempted
Author's Response: Thank you for this; glad you're enjoying the story. 1, 2, 4 were straight up typos, thank you. 3 I actually meant the way that I wrote it; Draco thought that what they were doing to one another was barbaric; when he's suddenly tackled by Harry in a similar manner, he finds a newfound appreciation for their methods. ;) Thanks for taking the time to review. ^_^ | |||
| Tigress | 2009.04.22 - 11:11PM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| I want to jump a Severus! Thanks for the slightly early chapter, and I think your theorizing with Draco is gorgeous. Harry continues to be adorable! Squee! Author's Response: LOL We *all* want to jump a Severus. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the theory (and Harry; he's fun to write lovestruck). Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| drush16 | 2009.04.21 - 09:38PM | 18: Seventeen: The Visit | Signed |
| At this time in my life...Thursday is my favorite day. I can't wait for the next chapter. If I told you it was my birthday could it come sooner? Only kidding, but--maybe? Author's Response: LOL When readers tell me it's their birthday, I usually e-mail them an excerpt of the next chapter (so if it's really your birthday, e-mail me). ;) The chapter proper should be up tomorrow. I'm glad that my fic is helping you enjoy Thursdays and I appreciate that you took the time to let me know. ^_^ | |||
| youcanon | 2009.04.20 - 09:58PM | 18: Seventeen: The Visit | Signed |
| okay! ready for next chapter NOW!!! Please post soon! great job Author's Response: LOL It should be up by tomorrow. I'm glad you're looking forward to it, and I appreciate that you took the time to let me know. ^_^ | |||
| Helena | 2009.04.20 - 02:17PM | 18: Seventeen: The Visit | Signed |
| A really strong chapter, with some massive shifts in attitudes. I thought the interaction with Ginny was a nice touch. Gutted that you strang me along with the "it'll be detention soon" line, only to cruelly end with the detention about to start. You know how to keep me hanging. All I ask now is that you don't treat this cliffhanger in the same manner that you have treated some previous cliffhangers; you must include some Snape in the next chapter!! Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I could have sworn that I coughed a *next chapter still has no Sev/Hermione* at you in the last review response. ;) But I promise straight up that Severus and Hermione are the first thing you will encounter in the next chapter. Thanks, as always, for the review. ^_^ | |||
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