Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| chyara | 2009.07.30 - 03:25AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| wonderful chapter! What a cliffhanger!
Why do i get the feeling she didn't throw up a sheild to block his cutting curse. I also think you've set it up for Severus to show his feelings for her.. just my opinion.
I don't agree with some of the other's opinion on your Sev... Sure i think he's being an ass... but not unredeemable. |
| Gitana | 2009.07.30 - 03:05AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| a-w-e-s-o-m-e chapter! why do you have to write so damn good? keeps me coming back every weds night like a little starving for loved elf? anyways i'm hoping that that date you mentioned is tomorrow, since it's Harry's birthday??? I guess we will have to wait and see, but take your time, I won't hate you for it :) |
| Sampdoria | 2009.07.30 - 03:02AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| Know this, I most honestly think this was a wonderful chapter. The Roger-incident was very well placed and necessary to balance the brilliance of the cure, not to mention it would have been unbelivable if Voldibutt hadn't continue trying to get the cure, or stop it all together, to keep his grip on the werewolfes.
But, while you probably is tired of me berating Severus, I just can't stop: You know I don't like him much in this story and would be quite happy to see Hermione falling in love with someone else. You know I don't think his "issues" are in any way excuses good enough for the behaviour he shows. It saddens me somewhat to say this anyway: In this chapter your Severus overstepped the bounderies from being a "man with issues" to being the very posterchild for Voldemorts most faithful follower and a lousy creep so totally that I probably will stop reading the story the day you let Hermione in any way forgive him or let him touch her ever again. I still love the plot, and for me there is so much story without the Hermione/ Severus relationship that I will continue to enjoy those parts of the story, but I just can't fanthom anyone with more than two braincells finding acceptable excuses for Severus behaviour. That said, I am still very much looking forward for the next update! |
| cassity282 | 2009.07.30 - 02:42AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| merlin! did you have to end it like that!
of corse you did that is what makes you such a good writer. who am i to question the writer? (bows)
this was wonderfull as always and i wanted to smak that roger! but good thinking on her part! oh and the blood! oh and for her to think of the kids! oh and not to have ther faces fall into there food!
ok im shuting up becais i will end up listing the hole story becaus i loved it all and i cant wait for more! |
| chewbecca2001 | 2009.07.30 - 02:30AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... CLIFFY FROM HELL!!! lol |
| buffyslayer | 2009.07.30 - 02:20AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| No worries about RL interference with the story's delivery; we've got your back. The tale that you have written and have faithfully devoted time to post is fantastic, and you've kept your word so far. So we have no reason to fear that this wonderful story would be abandoned. Besides, when you do get freedom to post, it will be much sweeter with the anticipation. Bravo to you! |
| a_reader | 2009.07.30 - 01:51AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| I love this story, which makes what I'm about to write seem harsh. Snape's unremitting anger and cruelty is really really beginning to turn me off on this. I like dark!Severus, but this SS seems completely incapable of the nuance and fluctuations of temper that even the cruelest person demonstrates. It's unwavering. And while that may be part of the story arc that you're crafting, we're 36 chapters in (not sure how many since he slept with HG) and -- aside from the brief interlude -- he shows no doubt, no humanity, no maturity, no sarcasm, not even little digs. Just anger. Sigh. I do love the complexity of your story, but in some ways I feel we're spinning wheels. I am happy if it never turns into a doves and rainbows romance, but there needs to be some semblance of real feeling. HG is also relentlessly warrior woman, with no room for doubt. I don't see how you get them back intersecting unless it's by deus ex machina, or the story goes on for 50 chapters. |
| Shiro Ryu | 2009.07.30 - 01:28AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| Fantastic chapter! Don't worry if you are a little late with the next chapter. Sometimes real life just gets in the way. Besides, if I remember correctly, you said that this story was essentially finished and all it needed was some editing. So, we know that the story won't be abandoned. So don't sweat it. I hope things improve for you at work soon. |
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