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| QuinnMom | 2009.10.08 - 03:51PM | 51: Forty-Six: The Wait | Signed |
| Woo Hoo! Finally some lemony goodness. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. | |||
| googlex | 2009.10.08 - 01:54PM | 1: The Prologue | Signed |
| I fell in love with this story over the summer, and it was one of the VERY few stories where I can believe it could happen. It started off a bit awkward for my tastes, and then there are all these cliff hangers where we have to wait a week to find out what happens. Severus is changing little by little and I'm also wondering how Hermione found out about Lily and Sev being friends anyway.But, yeah, I love it. | |||
| crazzdpixi | 2009.10.08 - 01:43PM | 51: Forty-Six: The Wait | Signed |
| So one thing that bugs me about this chapter/overall themes. And maybe it's one of those withholding-details-until-they're-needed things, but... I mean, Hermione is an intellegent woman, yet she never really thinks about contraception. And while I'm pretty sure the red potion Severus gave her the first time was a contraceptive (one that I'm guessing is still working since he hasn't mentioned it in their interludes here... unless her got caught up, too and this ends up as a preggers story) it seems... a little out of character for her (unless it's one of those she-was-a-virgin-and-thus-didn't-consider-things-like-that things). It's something that seems like you could resolve (you've resolved things like it before well enough) it just bugs me a bit right now. But hey, out of fourty-six chapters you've only done two things that bug me, so good on you. | |||
| crazzdpixi | 2009.10.08 - 01:37PM | 46: Forty-Two: The Detentions | Signed |
| So, there's just one thing that bugs me about this chapter. "May I tell Harry?" she asked. "I don't suppose I can stop you." "I would prefer not to upset you," she countered. "I would not ask you to lie to him," Severus returned. "He has a penchant for finding out information he isn't supposed to know; it might as well be you who tells him the truth in a reliable manner." I'm not really sure what they're refering to here. I'm pretty sure that it's the storage room wards, but the first time I read it I thought it was their reconciliation. And now I'm not really sure which it is... Just a bit of a clarity problem... Still an excelent chapter on the whole, though. | |||
| kass42 | 2009.10.08 - 12:31PM | 51: Forty-Six: The Wait | Signed |
| Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. | |||
| Gardengirl | 2009.10.08 - 11:02AM | 51: Forty-Six: The Wait | Signed |
| Woo hoo! At long last :) Thanks for this - it was very nicely written, flowed well, and rang true with your characterizations. Looking forward to them continuing to get on - and get IT on - while plotting the imminent demise of that Dark dickhead. | |||
| tkdalton | 2009.10.08 - 10:01AM | 51: Forty-Six: The Wait | Signed |
| Awwww they are so cute when they are getting along. Shy Severus was a total treat and I'm so glad that they were able to figure out what they wanted and get it together. *sigh* I just love it when they are happy. It however makes me wonder what it going to push them over the edge next. Will we get to see Severus and Hermione working together with the wards soon? But what I really want to know is how long it will take before Severus finds out he is her mate for life and how he will find this out. Once again another fabulous chapter please keep up the great work and thanks for making my Thursday! | |||
| thesculptress | 2009.10.08 - 08:32AM | 51: Forty-Six: The Wait | Signed |
| Thank you for another happy-making chapter. Happy Thanksgiving--I'll eat a few stuffed mushrooms on your behalf, as well as my own! | |||
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