Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| TheSlytherinQueen | 2009.10.15 - 12:47AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Oh damn. Seriously? Severus needs helllp. Hermione has proven herself time and time again and Severus just needs to accept that she loves him and wants to please him....in more ways than one ;)
The duel between them will be very interesting (I'm assuming he's not going to put ther agaisnst Draco) and I REALLY hope that Severus doesn't get too carried away....but maybe it's nessecary so that he can realize how much he loves her too....cause it's very obvious.
Anyways....great chapter! Can't wait for the next one...and now its time to go to bed :) |
| graenr | 2009.10.15 - 12:29AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| All right, I knew we weren't going to make it to the end without some form of angst between them. Wish we'd gotten to see the upcoming conversation though, I'd almost gotten used to walking away without an unsettled feeling!
Will you be sharing your favorite chocolate mousse recipe as an endnote? |
| Rageful Jewel | 2009.10.15 - 12:12AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
Just when you think that they got their shit together, the situation gets frakked up again. For all that is still good in the world, Snape, stop being a gorram, bloody idiot.
It is time like this that I wish Hermione had fallen for someone who is more emotional available than Snape. |
| Snarkykitty824 | 2009.10.15 - 12:04AM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| *is very curious about Severus' reaction*
And, as always, this story makes me happy. :o)
Aaaand, shwhaaaat? Near future? I absolutely adore that phrase! It's possibly my new favorite phrase, come to think of it. :) ~SK824~ |
| somebodyoranother | 2009.10.14 - 11:57PM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| So....he still won't apologize, they jump into bed together & he's an arse when she tries to intitiate things. I kinda hate him right now |
| ClariceS | 2009.10.14 - 11:18PM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Curses! Another falling out! I have to admit I'm as clueless as Hermione as to what happened this time. Looks like Severus is going to miss out on the Weresbane brewing again.
*eagerly awaits the next chapter* |
| reignaptolemy | 2009.10.14 - 11:06PM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| I understand that people have misunderstandings, but this is just...cruel! Hermione has got to stop being so understanding, and Severus needs to grovel big time! Please let us know that the torture has an end in sight! |
| semperdumbledore | 2009.10.14 - 10:49PM | 52: Forty-Seven: The Lead | Signed |
| Okay, first I want to say I do like your story a lot. But, I wasn't very happy with the last two chapters. I was waiting and hoping for an apology and really held off this rant hoping I wouldn't have to rant at Severus. But there you go, here it is.
I didn't feel like they should have jumped into bed together so soon because there was and is so much unresolved; which is going to bite them.
The man threw at Cruciatus curse at her. The man threatened to kill her. The man threw her out of his bedroom after taking her virginity. And yet still no apology! And you know, who apologizes - she does! And what for - because she wasn't obvious enough with him. She didn't swoon in his arms and declare her undying love for him when they first slept together. Whatever. So I held out from responding, and let them have their happy sex thinking, "Okay. The man is going to wake up and think, 'Oh, yeah, another thing I forgot to do on my Slytherin list, apologize to Hermione, and oh, grovel.'" But no.
Oh, and his excuse for treating her like sewage - Lily. Baloney! Move on, man! She didn't love you. That's like saying it's okay to kick and throw curses at Crookshanks because Mrs. Norris hissed at you. Give me a break. I don't buy it.
And you know why he doesn't like her to seize control. You see, he knows she's more powerful than he. So, if you take the control away from him in bed - what does he essentially got?
So, he has got to beg. Beg good. And be exceedingly apologetic. Where is a good Gryffindor to slap him when you need one? |
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