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| mousemt | 2009.05.14 - 09:55AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| An update! Yay! I love that you're updating so regularly. Now, I'm just humming over everything that happened and wondering if Snape is okay... Can't wait till next Thursday! Author's Response: *grins* Regular updates are scheduled to continue. I'm glad the chapter has got you stewing about what happens next (in the nicest possible way, of course). Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| phalanx | 2009.05.14 - 09:22AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| I am sorry I haven't reviewed before. I have been following this story pretty much from when you started posting it and together with 'second life' it's one of my most favourite stories on this site. I absolutely love your writing style, your original and imaginative plot, the Hermione and Harry interactions and the incredible amount of work that has gone into this fic. It really makes me look forward to Thursdays these days :). The only thing I'm a bit sad about is that Ron has such a marginal role in this piece - I know he probably doesn't feature very much in your storyline, but I am still holding out hope that hermione and Harry will eventually come to forgive him and that he may be a bit more reasonable. It just seems to be a shame given that they have been friends for the past six years.
Having said that though, I love the way you have developed Draco's character in this fic. I guess Ron wouldn't take too kindly to the Harry- Draco romance either, would he now :). Anyway, I just wanted to say this is an amazing piece of work, I really love this story (especially how you have brought in the unicorns and Fawkes) and I very much look forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: I'm delighted that you've taken the time to review now. ^_^ It's wonderful to hear all the things that you like so much about my fic. I'm actually relatively fond of Ron--probably much more than comes across in this fic--but I think the flaws that he has here are very canon; it's GoF all over again, only Hermione and Harry are *both* on the outs with him, both Head Boy/Girl, both living together, and both Pure Adults. This doesn't leave a lot of Ron time. Since I'm pretty much categorically against spoiling my readers, I won't tell you what's coming up with Ron in the future. As you say, Draco/Harry is really quite low on the list of things that Ron wants to accept. I'm glad you enjoyed Fawkes and the unicorns, too, and I really appreciate that you left a review. ^_^ | |||
| hedgehog | 2009.05.14 - 09:19AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| Fabulous Chapter and evil cliffie! thanks. Author's Response: LOL Thank you. ^_^ | |||
| newniepg | 2009.05.14 - 05:46AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| I am a bit shocked, I actually had tears in my eyes when Remus realised it had worked. I loved the scene on the lawn in the moonlight. Had a serious lump in my throat. I am glad you wrote in the preview that SS recovers! Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you enjoyed the cure and its aftermath. I suppose writing that Severus recovers *was* a bit of a spoiler, but there's no way I'd kill him off with 400K left in the fic. ;) Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| Lyra19 | 2009.05.14 - 05:26AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| Oh wow this chapter was so amazing! I totally freaked out several times and nearly gave my guinea pig a heart attack. Poor Severus, I hope that he's not too badly hurt. Anyway, I just wanted to say that you are fantastic as always, and thanks again.....oh an I found one silly mistake: "By the time she had flipped through all her notes, added 'addenda'," it was after her conversation with Severus. Author's Response: LOL Feed your guinea pig something extra special in apology from me (I have no idea what guinea pigs eat, lol). I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much, and I'm still working out a less repetitive thing to do with addenda. ;) Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| Tessa85 | 2009.05.14 - 05:01AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| Am experiencing a warm bubble of happiness which makes me want to hug my computer screen.
I quite like affronted Severus, he reminds me of a cat. I'm glad Hermione sorted him out though.
Minerva's reaction was the best for me, although Hermione and Remus crying just seemed so right.
Hermione will definitely get an O for her project from all the teachers. I am interested in seeing when the news reaches the Ministry and Rita Skeeter.
I hope Severus is ok and Albus's valentines decorations sound like fun especially if Hermione plays with them again. Author's Response: *beams* I'm glad this chapter made you so happy. Severus *does* have cat-like characteristics, doesn't he? I'm pleased that you enjoyed so many of the reactions and that you're looking forward to what's coming up next. Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| chewbecca2001 | 2009.05.14 - 04:05AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| Oh Silver... *wipes a tear away* I just cried my eyes out!! Remus' reaction was so beautiful. I really, truely, could see him running around the grounds, free at long last and I could just feel how very happy he felt. I could feel Hermione's frustration with Severus, and I just loved their interaction. This was just a beautiful, amazing chapter. It really lifted my heart. Bravo! Author's Response: *hugs Chewbecca* I'm glad you found the chapter so emotional; it was definitely an awesome moment for Remus. I'm glad you enjoyed the Hermione/Severus interaction, as well. Thanks so much for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| agnes_grey | 2009.05.14 - 01:47AM | 22: Twenty-One: The Cure | Signed |
| Kisses kisses kisses kisses!!! You are amazing!!!!!!!!!!! I was so thrilled for Hermione, and she handled Severus so well, and I just like the way that you write her! Awesome job! Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you enjoyed Hermione's methods in this chapter and her characterization overall. Thanks, as always, for the review. ^_^ | |||
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