Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| Losumi | 2009.08.26 - 09:26PM | 43: Thirty-Nine: The Blood | Signed |
| All right, Severus. MAN UP! Let's hear that APOLOGY! And dear author -- you continue to surpass yourself! |
| leynarountree | 2009.08.26 - 09:25PM | 43: Thirty-Nine: The Blood | Signed |
| This is one of the only fics I crave to read with regularity. I know you said it's long but heavens! Please post two chaps next week. Pretty please, or maybe an extra tomorrow? You're killing me. I need more about Severus. As insightful as Hermione is about the nuances of other couples relationships, you'd think she'd figure out that she handled her own in a cowardly way. Though I confess she's probably not lining herself up for more pain and rejection. I'm secretly hoping that Draco or Harry dares to break the promise not to tell and meddle a bit themselves. Hermione had a hand with telling Draco about Harry after all. Good luck and congratulations on a fantastically written story. Good job! |
| slpkfast | 2009.08.26 - 09:17PM | 43: Thirty-Nine: The Blood | Signed |
| Ohhhh...I so want to click the down arrow at the end of the page to continue reading. Alas, not yet. And I have not the self-control to *not* read a couple of weeks in a row and "save up" a few chapters. So, Hermione has actually justified to herself that, "...people were most emotional and least rational when it came to those they cared about dearly." Shall she soon have some shred of evidence that will allow her to apply this train of thought to Snape. Er, Professor Snape? I STILL am anxious to hear about the red liquid from the night She and Severus got their Pure Power on. I cannot wait for Hermione to have some *hint* that he feels something positive for her. I have to believe that at this point in the story, whatever his other feelings are, he at least feels admiration, respect and some level of attraction to Hermione. Surely more than that...a bit of esteem, a dash of awe, a strong desire for more...do you think he would FEEL differently about her if he knew her feelings for him? I'm asking you, because I feel sure you know more than we readers do! ; )
Thank you again for a wonderful chapter. And thanks, as always, for making the effort to share your story and update as promised!! |
| LauraK | 2009.08.26 - 09:14PM | 43: Thirty-Nine: The Blood | Signed |
| I so love this story but it is becoming a bit tedious how you're keeping Severus and Hermione apart.......man. Will they only get together in the last chapters?? Please take pity on us! Severus needs to make some advances, even if they're only to apologize and become friends with Hermione again....... |
| Tessa85 | 2009.08.26 - 09:00PM | 43: Thirty-Nine: The Blood | Signed |
| Despite the apologies, Draco and Harry still should have had more faith in Hermione. I hope Severus goes to the next weresbane transformation and starts to get involved. Interesting reason for their anger of the use of unicorn blood, I like how you explain things using canon knowledge.
Hermione is becoming like Albus with her matchmaking, but please let her not try to find someone for Ron.
The Ravenclaws have no chance of beating Hermione's project, they must be annoyed. |
| Mai | 2009.08.26 - 08:29PM | 43: Thirty-Nine: The Blood | Signed |
| OMG you posted early tonight ! Thanks so much. I have not read the chapter yet but have been counting hrs today till the approximate time :) I am so exicited. I hope that we will get some answers and not another cliffie chapter like the last one although it was sill really good :)))) |
| RealliefunKie | 2009.08.26 - 04:59PM | 42: Thirty-Eight: The Runaway | Signed |
| I do not usually leave a review, but your beautifully written masterpiece deserves one. I love how your story fits perfectly into JKR's world. Everything seems to flow nicely and has it's own rhythm. It's not one of those far-fetched parallel universe that other writers are prone to do. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us. |
| Amr | 2009.08.25 - 01:04PM | 42: Thirty-Eight: The Runaway | Signed |
| Oh, one more thing: What on earth is wrong with Hermione that she is so upset by Severus's remark that "I ought to kill you." In chapter sixteen, when he remarked (without the subjunctive), "I am going to wring your little Gryffindor neck and then I’m going to put you in detention for the rest of your life," she reacted far more appropriately with amusement, recognizing the protectiveness. While he's undoubtedly unaware that the cursed effects of unicorn blood are absent if it's freely given, you'd think that once she has time to think about it, she'd have recognized it as a similar hyperbole. And she's really got to stop running away from him without explanation like an idiot every time he says something that she interprets as an attack. It's an incredibly stupid thing for such an intelligent (and brave) young woman to do. |
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