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| feisanna | 2009.04.05 - 06:32PM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| Absolutely lovely as always. I'm I'm so thrilled that she didn't transform in front of them - keeping that secret for a little while longer at least Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. While Hermione would definitely have transformed were it necessary for the rescue, she would definitely prefer to keep a bit more of herself to herself while she can. Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| hiddden | 2009.04.05 - 01:17PM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| I really like this story because it branches away from canon considerably and becomes more fantasy with elements of the characters retained. What fanfic should be. Author's Response: I used canon as a jumping off point and tried to remain canon-compliant (at least to OotP) while creating something new; I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate that you took the time to let me know. | |||
| Helena | 2009.04.05 - 05:17AM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| I really wasn't expecting the Pure Adult revelation to come at this point. However, with your plot, I find that it fits very well. One of the (many) things I enjoy about this story is that you know what is going to happen, but you don't know how. This chapter was a pleasant suprise in that respect. Two comments: (1) I thought that as Castina said the werewolves had been in cages, it could actually be that Voldemort has been keeping them captive, and they were not there by their own free will as Hermione considered. (2) At this point, only Draco and Severus (the potential mates) know of the Pure Adult status. There's definite potential for concocting a story to throw all the others off the scent for a little longer. I'd rather it remains between the four of them. Any chance? I'll just have to wait and see! Keep up the good work! Author's Response: I'm glad you found that the revelation worked for you. Hermione and Harry went to great lengths to protect their secret, and while it was inevitable that it would come out eventually, it seemed improbable to me that it would be due to something as banal as a slip-up (which would also make it more likely that undesirable people found out, and I didn't want to go there as the starting off point). More about the werewolves and everyone else's knowledge, theories, and reactions will be coming in the next chapter. Thanks, as always, for the review. ^_^ | |||
| leonie | 2009.04.05 - 12:17AM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| evil cliffhanger! i can' t wait to read what's going to happen now that they are all in on the secret! *worries* you are doing an amazing job. looking forward to next thursday! Author's Response: Yes, it is evil. I freely admit it, because there is simply an overwhelming number of you who think so. ;) I'm glad you're looking forward to what is coming up, and I appreciate that you took the time to review again ^_^ | |||
| Pixie Dust | 2009.04.04 - 11:50PM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| You just may be evil, stopping at such a cliffhanger! I can't wait until Thursday! Author's Response: You are not the first person to tell me so after reading this chapter, lol. ;) The next chapter is in the queue, I promise. Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| SAMANTHAKITTY | 2009.04.04 - 09:45PM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| JUST WANTED TO SAY THANKS FOR WRITING, AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THURSDAY. Author's Response: You're very welcome. I'm glad you're looking forward to what's coming up next. Thanks for taking the time to review again. ^_^ | |||
| Capra | 2009.04.04 - 09:37PM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| Please update soon! Like others I am addicted to this site and I find your story very refreshing and original within HG/SS fanfiction universe. I just love how you were building plot through last chapters and preparing us for future ones. Like I wrote before in last review, I guess it takes a lot of time and charts to keep everything together and still you managed to edit chapter and update every week. You are amazing!!! :)
But still it is evil of you to wait so long :)))
Wonderful chapter , like always. I cant wait to see Snape's reaction... (sorry if my english sucks) Author's Response: It's lovely to hear that you find my story original; I did my best to do something interesting with a clichéd premise. With a fic of this length, a lot of build-up was required, and I'm pleased that it's worked for you. Working on this fic has been a labour of love, so even when I wanted to pull my hair out trying to plot/chart/organise/edit, it's been worth it in the end. The weekly updates will continue, no matter how evil that makes me. ;) Thank you for taking the time to review--your English is excellent. ^_^ | |||
| wyoh | 2009.04.04 - 06:53PM | 16: Fifteen: The Moon | Signed |
| I've read many SS/HG fan-fics over a number of years and rarely feel compelled to leave a review. I think this story is amazing to say the least. It has an originality that I've found has been lacking in the SS/HG writing world as of late. I love the pacing of this story. The voice and personality traits of the characters are individually unique while not being overshadowed by the author's own voice. I come upon many fics where the characters seem flat and stuck in this static or unbelievable personality. Your characters are dynamic (even the ones with smaller roles) and I can believe that their actions aren’t out of the ordinary for the type of person they are. They feel like the characters JK has created. The plot has kept me constantly entertained. When at first I saw that you relied heavily on prose and thus had less dialog, I thought that this might be an issue ( considering people tend to read over or scan prose quickly to get to parts that capture their fancy.) This was not so, I didn’t want to miss a line. Your prose is written with careful necessity, supplying great descriptors and telling action. I loved the internal dialog with the other creatures and between Hermione and Harry as well. Amazing balance of humor and drama. Good job, I look forward to reading more of your fan fic work and perhaps( with your knack for writing and character development) maybe your own original book of fiction, eh? Author's Response: *beams* Thank you very much! I know my style does not suit everyone, so its always delightful to hear from a reader who really enjoys it. I did my best with this fic to take the characters that JKR created and expand on them in realistic ways so that you could really believe they started out the way she wrote them and through my interpretation and development plausibly ended up here in year seven. I hope that the fic will continue to keep you entertained. Thanks again for taking the time to write such a wonderful review. I would love to publish original fiction some day, so we shall see. ^_^ | |||
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