Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| princessgraciemix3 | 2009.11.11 - 11:00PM | 59: Fifty-Three: The Form | Signed |
| Oh good a chapter where they are happy again! and soon to be a double dose for the week utterly awesome author you are! |
| bournespeed | 2009.11.11 - 10:12PM | 59: Fifty-Three: The Form | Signed |
| I think that must be my favourite chapter so far. Caring Severus is much more fun than Snarling Sev!! A black panther is probably the most apt animagus there could be and wouldn't we all want to be Hermione stroking his fur - lucky, lucky girl.
Can't wait till Friday now. |
| crazzdpixi | 2009.11.11 - 10:09PM | 58: Fifty-Two: The Block | Signed |
| I wanted to review this chapter before I read the next one. RL has kept me from reviewing lately, but this story has been a beacon of light in complicated times. Anyway. I continue to adore the developements in Severus and Hermione's relationship. The role reversal was totally adorable. So I'm wondering about Severus's form... I'm thinking it'll either be a bat (because Fawkes called him bat-man once, and he's usually perceptive about these things) or a horse (because that would be appropriate.) They argue about a door, eh? I wonder if it's a between-the-rooms door. If so, I hope Severus is in favor of the door in the arguement. Cause that would be an interesting turn. Lovely, lovely. I'm off to read the new chapter now. |
| Nerdlee | 2009.11.11 - 10:06PM | 59: Fifty-Three: The Form | Signed |
| Holy hockey pucks! I really love your writing. You know that, right? Can't get enough. Thank you for a chapter that didn't end with a cliffhanger. It will make my week slightly less stressful. Odd that.
Thank you.
~Mia |
| celestinia | 2009.11.11 - 01:41PM | 58: Fifty-Two: The Block | Signed |
| I absolutely love this story; I've been bookmarking and reading chapters for a long, long time and it's one that I never forget to check on weekly.
You've got a wonderful writing style and the characters are well-written and easy to empathize with; very engaging for the reader. I can't wait to see how everything ends, but at the same time I never want it to end. |
| Moyra | 2009.11.10 - 03:43PM | 58: Fifty-Two: The Block | Signed |
| Sorry for not reviewing the last chaps – but RL has been extremely busy for me, I haven’t had any time to r&r. --- Anyway, I am quite pleased with the growing relationship, the growing trust between them. It’s very interesting to see so much of S&H-quality-time, either talks or discussions/arguments or lemons. Though they remain complicated persons, no surprise there, but they have now a far more stable basis and I think they will be able to solve any upcoming bumps in the road. --- It’s also very fascinating what Hermione is able to do with the wards, and I look very much forward to the final confrontation when all her work will show its fruits. On this note, shouldn’t she work more with Severus in this regard? |
| aurora borealis | 2009.11.10 - 11:27AM | 58: Fifty-Two: The Block | Signed |
| While I can see that the werewolf image would be traumatic and not conducive to transforming, again Severus jumps to idiotic conclusions - Hermione has just spent a good deal of time working with him, and he thinks she doesn't want to help him? Actually, I am wondering why Hermione doesn't share her own difficulties with transformation prior to her Pure Adult Status - it might relieve some of his embarrasment. I'm really curious to know what Severus' form will be - there is a very good story over on Occlumency called Learning to Uncurl in which Severus' animagus form is a hedgehog - all prickly and tightly wound -which quite suits him. Of course, considering how obnoxious he has been for most of this story, I would snigger and think it well-deserved if his form was something totally ignominious - like a cockroach or a slug. |
| cassity282 | 2009.11.07 - 07:33PM | 58: Fifty-Two: The Block | Signed |
| damit Severus! let her get the other option out of her mouth befor you go and get all huffy! |
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