Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| curikitten | 2009.09.10 - 12:18AM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| Finally. I mean, really. Finally. Such a bloody stubborn man. And foolish and blind and... well. But good on Hermione for not giving him what he wants right away. Because that would give him far too much power in a situation where power is already an issue. |
| LauraK | 2009.09.10 - 12:14AM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| Oh, some ON!! He wants to talk and she says no?! *sigh* He's been a complete ass, yes, but she can tell he's not acting violently so why would she shoot him down, after continuing to love him after all he's done? It's time to hash it out! PLEASE UPDATE SOONER!! I'm begging, really.... |
| disapparator | 2009.09.09 - 11:53PM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| I totally get why she simply said No.
It's also worth waiting for weekly update(s) I could use phrases like
"emotional punching bag" "uneven power base" "control issues" "lack of communication skills" "complex social hierchy" "P.B.A" "self esteem
issues" "situational ethics" "sexist behavior" "political necessity" the list and reasoning behind their combined behavior(s) is quite lengthy.I'm enjoying the Hermoine
viewpoint. His reasoning behind his own behavior should be excellent reading. Glad you're past the problems at work. They take alot out of you. This is one of the best fan fics I've read in a while. This one is
something special and unique. |
| crystalclear | 2009.09.09 - 11:33PM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| Yay! Poor Severus. Hermione's taken all of the fun out of assigning her detentions!Hey, sometimes cleaning and organizing can be very rewarding. My own room is a mess, but I clean other people's stuff without hesitation! And if you need a laugh, check out "A Very Potter Musical" on YouTube. It's under StarKidPotter. It's a full-length Harry Potter musical, and it's hilarious! (No Severus/Hermione, though.) Can't wait until the next chapter! |
| cassity282 | 2009.09.09 - 11:08PM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| (runs squeeling around the hotel room) severus wants to talke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok now that that is out of my system(for the moment). that was an amazing chapter as always i realy cant wait for the next one.this stroy keeps me going and i look forward to it evry week. |
| princessgraciemix3 | 2009.09.09 - 11:00PM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| Must agree with Nessasnight. Very good... wish for new material to come up sooner than Thursday... but I'll survive I guess... |
| Nessasnight | 2009.09.09 - 10:47PM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| Sorry for the second review (though I don't think you mind all that much :p ) but I wanted to say that I completely agree with both persephone_bound AND semperdumbledore on what they had to say! |
| Nessasnight | 2009.09.09 - 10:44PM | 45: Forty-One: The Children | Signed |
| Ohhh! J'arrive pas a y croire. You make every chapter a delight all on it's own! The cuteness of Sophia was a little touch that I felt was good to read in a story so serious. I've never seen Tonks as a mother figure (not even in canon) but with Sophia! The fact that Severus would find something to criticise while looking in the mirror of Erised struck so true. I also liked that Hermione ends the chapter like she does, though not 'hearing' her thoughts about that last bout makes me wonder. I'm getting so used to having her opinion on everything throughout the story, I can't wait to see the continuation of just that particular scene. Not much Harry Draco in this chapter but that's not a bad thing. Dear, I love them but at one point it almost felt like it was their story instead of... I want to say Hermione and Severus' but really right now it's only Hermione's. Anyhow, I hope everything goes well for you, that your editing of futur chapters don't take up too much of your time. Take care! |
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