Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| xikum | 2013.06.09 - 09:35PM | 49: Forty-Five: The Mousse (Part One) | Signed |
| For once, it is nice to see Severus in the position of having to see how it feels to have someone he cares for assume he did something he did not do, based on what he has said, and how he has acted towards her - Hermione! The shoe is on the other foot, now. I think that is even more delicious than any mousse could ever be - and I, like Hermione, adore mousse! Thank you for that. Took toooooo long, though. |
| xikum | 2013.06.09 - 06:28AM | 36: Thirty-Four: The Attempt | Signed |
| Good God! What in Hell is wrong with him!? Given Severus' attitude, I would have to consider Hermione co-dependent, and in need of help to leave the relationship, maybe go to Victor... Snape would have to do one Hell of a lot of reparations, over a very long time, to redeem himself, after ll he has unjustly done to her, by this point! |
| xikum | 2013.06.08 - 05:20PM | 26: Twenty-Five: The Toast | Signed |
| Feels like Severus has been being a jerk forever; I can't believe he still has not apologized to Hermione for his utterly egregious behavior. Poor woman. |
| xikum | 2013.06.08 - 02:52PM | 24: Twenty-Three: The Invitation | Signed |
| t this point, I would gladly hex Severus into near oblivion.near, only because Hermione still wants him. I've read this before, and am thoroughly enjoying it again, even though I should be working on an end of year report... sigh. Brilliant story, truly, and just as good, or better on the re-read! |
| loreen77 | 2013.05.20 - 09:53PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Brava! That was an amazing journey. Just wonderful. I have devoured it ravenously ovet the last week and what a great journey it has been. Your writing style and character voice was a joy to read. I apologize for not reviewing chapter by chapter as i normally do but i just had to rush off to the next chapter so fast....alas i will rectify my oversight when i reread this story.....which i plan to do soon. 10++ from loreen77 in ohio usa in case you still mark your map. |
| Laure_lei | 2013.05.10 - 07:21PM | 8: Seven: The Consequences | Signed |
| This is the third time I've read this story, and it gets better every time. One of my absolute favorites! |
| loreen77 | 2013.05.08 - 08:29AM | 1: The Prologue | Signed |
| Great start, wonderful intro with suspenseful intrigue already. I look forward to reading more! |
| Miss | 2013.03.30 - 07:07AM | 49: Forty-Five: The Mousse (Part One) | Signed |
| I absolutely adore this story and have read it many times. The downside to that is that you notice small things. You seem to be off on the number of werewolves in the chapter called the mousse.
You start with 46 (excluding Remus and Draco), then when they are about to change, you mention that there are 4 children and 18 adults and then that there are 29 done and 18 to go. If you include Remus and Draco in those 29, then the only change should be the 18 adults in this trial. If not, then the number should be 27.
I know it's just a small thing, but I love the detailing going into this story, so I figured you would want this one to be correct too. Or you can correct me if I'm wrong. :-) |
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