Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| geordiegirl89 | 2010.03.24 - 03:14AM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| I happened upon your story when hitting "random fic" as is the way now i find most of the storys on here I read. After checking to make sure that it was either completed or had been updated with in my own personal time limits. I started to read.... and I loved it. I read it as much as humanly possible to read, often letting hours on end pass before realising i had thins that must be accomplished. This story is amazing, the way it progressed and climaxed was beyond comprehention.. More than once your writing affected my own emotion (making for a rather confused relitive when they asked me a simple question and I almost started to cry). You have an amazing talent, and it was a pure joy to read this. I do feel a bit of not negative feed back but a small disapointment. The epiloge in my opinion, left a bit to be desired. I like the fact that you told of Andrew again, and enjoyed reading this from his view point. But I find that the chapter out of sync with the other chapters. The fact that you spent *accordign to ashwinder* 67 or 68 chapters from a view point focused on Hermione to totaly switch that to solely Andrew for an epiloge left, for me, alot to be desired. I would have appreciated this chapter of an epiloge more had there been one based from Hermmione that focused on her excitement of bonding or what would happen later ect.... I thourouly enjoyed this sotry and the three days it has taken me to read it. As stated before you have an amazing talent and you and this story will and have been added to my favorites list.
Thank you for writing this and also thank you for reading my rediculously long review :)
~geordiegirl |
| Tangerine Dream | 2010.03.22 - 07:31PM | 19: Eighteen: The Explanation | Signed |
| This is a great story, but there is far too little Severus in it! |
| Sarah_Smiles | 2010.03.20 - 08:58PM | 47: Forty-Three: The Communications | Signed |
| I would like to let you know that the sexual tension is DRIVING ME NUTS!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait to finish this AMAZING story! |
| Tangerine Dream | 2010.03.20 - 07:49PM | 15: Fourteen: The Dance | Signed |
| Wow!! What a busy holiday!! When will Hermione ever clue in that Severus is pissed off because he fancies her!!?? |
| Tangerine Dream | 2010.03.18 - 06:36PM | 10: Nine: The Bets | Signed |
| Great story. This chapter was like reading The Sun newspaper!! |
| Merlyn | 2010.03.11 - 06:28PM | 69: The Epilogue | Signed |
| Albuquerque, New Mexico, to be more precise.
It's been two days since I finished reading this story, and I have yet to come up with an appropriately thoughtful review. I can't find my words.
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| Merlyn | 2010.03.10 - 01:25AM | 68: Sixty: The Afterlife | Signed |
| In response to your question: New Mexico.
In response to your story, I very nearly have no words. I don't belive I will ever find it's rival. It is intricate and emotional and comprehensive. It is... an artistic feat; it is certainly sommething I never expected. |
| Merlyn | 2010.03.07 - 01:52PM | 3: Two: The Plan | Signed |
| Your author's note about the mauraders' map just made my day. |
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