Reviews for The Problem with Purity
| princessgraciemix3 | 2009.11.14 - 01:48AM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| LOL oh Harry... I wonder who else heard? |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.11.14 - 01:08AM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| "In moments like these, she felt as though she could feel what he could not say, and she was content." This line says it all, as far as showing how far the two of them have come: quite a distance! I was glad you translated the Greek 'monokeros' for us (= 'one horn'?); I had hoped you would. Until I read your A/N at the bottom, I didn't know it meant unicorn; I'd wondered how the word "...showed he had a sentimental side". I'm a little concerned about the other A/N, which mentioned an unexpected problem during the Potions practical. But that's for next week! Thanks for all your hard work, and especially the extra chapter! As usual, well done indeed.
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| Losumi | 2009.11.14 - 12:37AM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| Oh -- now THAT was unexpected! Looking forward to seeing what happens now! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.11.14 - 12:32AM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| I'm not even quite midway through the chapter (which I like very much so far), but I wanted to note this typo before I forgot about it. It's maybe 1/3 to 1/2 the way down. The line begins: "It was a busy time of year for Severus as well as Hermione, however, so she was waiting for a more propitious time to tender this invitation. Currently, the only time she could really rationalize spending so many hours out here was when she would normally be sleeping, and she couldn't in good conscious..." should end "...in good CONSCIENCE." Everything else is going great, so I will go back to it, now, and return with another review.
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| crystalclear | 2009.11.14 - 12:31AM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| Oh, Harry, he's so silly. A lot of the dialogue in this chapter seemed very theatrical to me, but maybe that's just because I'm in a play right now. Love it! |
| crspens | 2009.11.13 - 11:46PM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| Wow, it's finally the end of the year. I'm incredibly excited for this fact. However I do have to say, even though you're not writing intense stuff at this point, it's got that anxious intense feeling with it. Great read as always. Happy Friday the 13th. :) |
| joots | 2009.11.13 - 11:41PM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| This has been the best thing all day. Crappy weather at the moment causing all kinds of issues. Thank you for this bonus chapter!! I really love the development between Severus and Hermione. I can't wait to see what's going on in the potions exam... did Harry mean to ask that, or was he talking to himself loudly? Excellent once again, thank you for posting!! |
| Keagan | 2009.11.13 - 11:34PM | 60: Fifty-Four: The Preparation | Signed |
| Oh no! Harry is cheating?! Tell me that it wasn't on purpose, please. Maybe he was just anxious, and thought it "out loud" instead of to himself? I see Draco as being just as upset as Hermione if Harry is cheating on his exam, so I hope that wasn't his intent.
I am really loving this story, and the bonus chapters are always great day brighteners. Thank you! |
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