Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| GreenEyesBlind | 2004.12.07 - 07:50PM | 8: “Tea and Comfort, Confessions and Absolutions” | Signed |
| I love the nice pace of unwinding in this story. I'm terribly glad she didn't jump in bed immediately with Severus. And the sex scene with Ron is excellent (in an awful way). |
| Angie | 2004.12.07 - 07:28PM | 8: “Tea and Comfort, Confessions and Absolutions” | Anonymous |
| This was such a good chapter. You are a tease!! So, how long are you going to have us hanging until our favorite Griffindor throws caution to the wind, huh? LOL I'm so enjoying this fic.
I know, as a Christmas present to your faithful readers....have Severus and Hermione get to know each other MUCH better. ;) |
| LariLee | 2004.12.07 - 06:58PM | 8: “Tea and Comfort, Confessions and Absolutions” | Signed |
| Poor Hermione! I wish I could feel sorry for Ron and Harry, but I just can't. Excellent story! ~Lisa |
| The Dark Morning Lord | 2004.12.07 - 06:49PM | 8: “Tea and Comfort, Confessions and Absolutions” | Signed |
| I love this story! Great poem at the beginning, loved it; truly hullarious! <3
I quite agree with you, "for play is not just for the body, but for the mind as well..." so true. Yes, let's have Granger simmer for a bit, contemplate about her gigolo, scold herself for it, then other stuff...
I really loved how you portrayed Severus in this chapter. To have him feel he needs to help Hermione. I like what you said about his concience, and how there are the angel Dumbledore and McGonagal, then have his own personalty play the devil on his shoulders. Great job!
I eagerly await the next chapter, so please write, write, write....and update!!! (I also read this fic on adultfan) |
| Lana Manckir | 2004.12.07 - 06:11PM | 8: “Tea and Comfort, Confessions and Absolutions” | Signed |
| Wow Very emotional chapter and I can't help but putting myself in her place. I've been there so many times I lost count. This is really realistic and I know that once she overcomes the guilt, she'll become cynical. Only then things will heat up ;-) Great job, I love the fact you're going slow with this. |
| Alarase | 2004.12.07 - 06:09PM | 8: “Tea and Comfort, Confessions and Absolutions” | Signed |
| I absolutly love this story. I cannot wait to see where it goes. You write well, and I don't loose interest anywhere at all! In fact, I'm tempted to say shag studying for my exam and go back and re-read this from the start. Brilliant!! Make the next update be soon and long :D |
| Winna | 2004.12.07 - 10:11AM | 7: "I'm A Bad Little Hufflepuff!" | Signed |
| Tease! Oh, well, at least I know there'll be some HG/SS interaction in the next chapter. |
| qwertz | 2004.12.07 - 04:14AM | 1: "The Pub" | Anonymous |
the link to the story doesn't work...
Author's Response: Ashwinder is ironing out some of the wrinkles with some upgrades. Should be working soon. If it's not working in another day or so, contact the site admin. That's all I can say. |
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