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| Moyra | 2005.04.03 - 07:43AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| Fine chap; glad that there is a real friendship growing between them. The sensual handling of Severus digit was quite … intriguing. You know that you are building up high expectations for the “final-to-happen-coming-together” ?!? But “expectations” are the latent issue of this story … I agree with Severus that he has to be more bluntly with his hints – in Hermione´s actual state of mind he (and we) would sit there until summer (2005) before she’ll realise anything… Ron’s come back at this moment was quite a surprise. Dolohov´s actions will probably lead to some interesting talks, between all charas. Looking forward to the next chap, M. Author's Response: Yes, interesting talks are coming all right. But a little transition chapter is needed first before we can get down to nitty-gritty fights. | |||
| tparial | 2005.04.02 - 02:08AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| This a wonderful story! I hope you will give Hermione and Ginny both "happily ever afters". | |||
| Nosferatas | 2005.04.01 - 05:19PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| This was again soooooo good! The way you described Severus' feelings when she licked (is that right, sorry, am from Germany) his finger... TERRIFIC!!! Please, don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!
Greets
Nosferatas Author's Response: Lick is the right term. You 'lick' and icecream cone, you 'suck' on a lollipop, and you 'nibble' on a piece of chocolate. All three things she did to Severus' finger. As of right now, the next chapter is with my 2nd beta, so it is definitley on it's way. Glad you enjoyed my little bit of sexual teasing between Hermione and Severus. | |||
| Nyx | 2005.03.31 - 10:48AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| I am at the edge of my seat! I like the fact that Snape is taking notice of Hermiones well being. Your "hint of a lemon" was so sexually charged my screen smelled like pledge for days!!
Good work and keep them cranking out!
Author's Response: SNORT! Lemon scented Pledge...God, that's a good one. Will have to remember that line. I was hping I would have many of my readers...squirming...in their seats with this chapter...and squirming in the good way. Thrilled to see it worked. | |||
| Novinha | 2005.03.31 - 06:18AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| Dear Betz, Honestly, that was wonderful. The sexual tension, dialogue... The pacing is still just terrific... And I loved the Dolohov accident. I can't help but feel sorry for him. And I liked the breasts problem Hermione had. There is no woman completely happy with her looks - and I really understand what Hermione feels. At least my hair is quite obedient. I am looking so much forward to the next chapter. Greetings from Poland, Novinha Author's Response: Hi Novinha. I always look forward to your reviews as they tend to be thoughtful and full of good analysis. Yes, I'm tired of fic where Hermione has perfect tits. I never had them, why should she? More on women and their critical views of their own bodies coming up in future chapters. I was hoping the Dolohov incident would bring a bit of spark to the story and tension to Draco's and Severus' lives as well as Hermione's. Glad the pacing it to your liking, I sometimes worry I've written too much or too little. | |||
| TNgirl | 2005.03.30 - 09:55PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| I just love this story! Keep it coming! | |||
| Lana Manckir | 2005.03.30 - 12:00PM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| Beautiful chapter! The Dolohov thing can not be good to Severus situation can it? I absolutely LOVED the scene with her pleasuring his finger! Brilliant! | |||
| spaz141 | 2005.03.30 - 03:17AM | 19: "Melt Down" | Signed |
| Now she had double guilt...and Ron. Yuck. Thanks, I am enjoying this read. | |||
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