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shishkeberry2006.01.21 - 11:21PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
Excellent chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thanks.

ladycplum2006.01.21 - 10:53PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
Damn, I IMMEDIATELY thought of that scene from Mr. Mom during Draco & Snape's exchange. Anyways, BEAUTIFUL, the care and passion he gave to her, amazing chapter. And Lana's pictures are a perfect compliment to the story.

Author's Response: Yeah, that is once of my favorite movie scenes, along with the bar scene in Near Dark, several scenes from Brazil, and....well, I could go on, but I won't. Yeah, Snape needed to be a little extra gentle with her, as she's a bit fragile right now.

pickles2006.01.21 - 10:43PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
OH that's one of my favorite movies... okay on with the review... EXCELLENT!!! I was a bit worried that things wouldn't straighten out.. Also do the walls have special silencing charms on them so no one knows what the other neighbors are doing? Hope so.. Could imagine Malfoy banging on the ceiling.. Oh crap I have Tony Orlando singing Knock three times on the ceiling if you want me. Twice on the pipes Ahhhhhh Help get it out of my head... ;) Waiting for more.

Author's Response: Hermione and Severus have been through enough crap. They needed a break and jsut have a good shag without any more complications right now. No, the walls do not have silencing charms, as you'll find out next chapter. More is on hte way, as I just got ch49 back from my third beta this morning and will be posting tonight.

Moniquee2006.01.21 - 10:37PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
I cannot express how glad I am that you waited so long for them to shag. It just would not have fit anywhere in the previous chapters. Plus, the anticipation makes it all the more enjoyable.

Author's Response: Thanks, yeah, I wanted to the shag after the anniversary dinner and after his mask came off, otherwise it would be a recipe for disaster. Glad you enjoyed the lengthy wait.

lunafish2006.01.21 - 10:34PM1: "The Pub"Signed
OMG!!! I have been following this story for quite awhile now (though not as long as some, of course!), and I have been amazed at your beautiful characterization of your protagonists and the insightful treatment of Hermione's loneliness and despair. You seem to understand exactly what a woman in this position feels like being constantly put down and neglected.

You've done such a wonderful job building to this moment of fulfillment and joy, not giving into the temptation, which anyone else in your position would have felt, to rush to bring those two together. I like that Hermione wants to do the right thing, is struggling to do the right thing, but at the same time feels so much passion and desire. I admire her so much, regardless of the infidelity here. Her husband has slowly and carefully been chipping away at her sense of self, but ultimately he's failed in his attack. She is wholly desirable, as Severus has discovered. :-D

And Severus...wow, he's still completely himself, but also completely different. His characterization makes so much sense, in that you've convinced me that he's Snape as Snape would be given the circumstances that your character has endured. I'm glad that you gave Hermione the time and opportunity to learn this herself. I've really felt that every chapter has been another necessary step in bringing these two together...something I'm not able to say about most other book length fics I've seen.

And now the wait has paid off! Thank you so much for this wonderfully satisfying chapter (and the surprisingly believable sex). I look forward to seeing what comes next!


justme2006.01.21 - 09:59PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
Gobsmacked! You threw Molly into the picture!!! But what a lovely shag they had...Severus is the master :) I just cant get enough of this fic, write on!!!!!!!!

Jadeous2006.01.21 - 09:43PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
amazing, and so real too-- it was really great sex, but it wasn't perfect, well maybe perfect for the situation, but you know what i mean i think. great job.

leannt32006.01.21 - 09:11PM50: “Truth and Consequences”Signed
Molly Weasely!



That was a shock. I am wondering whether you are going to write her as truly god awful and meddling (perhaps she is going to see Severus because she suspects Ginny's or Hermione's affair and thinks she can talk /threaten the Severus out of it - if it's Ginny she suspects, Molly may not realize that the gigolo Lavender set her up with is not the same one Ginny is seeing). Or perhaps you will write Molly sympathetically as ultimately well meaning, who wants the ear of a gigolo because she has realized that in doing what she thinks is right (pushing Ginny and Hermione towards having kids, telling Harry to be gentle with Ginny) Molly has alienated her daughter and youngest daughter-in-law.



As for the lemons, yay. However, I must admit that after the slow burn in your writing being so far, I was a bit surprised as how quickly Severus and Hermione went from being so upset at eachother to shagging. I thought Hermione's quick understanding and forgiveness of Severus's coldness and statement about potions ingredients was the one unrealistic part to the story. I would have thought it would take at least some more explanation on Severus's part (not days, but at least a 1/2 hour or 15 minute conversation). Still, it's very good to see them finally get together.

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