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cathmorgan52005.08.27 - 12:20PM37: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 1Signed
What I enjoyed most about this half chapter: how he storkes her hand when they first sit, the hints about identity, the descriptions of flavors and aromas that seem to make all the sensuous details tangible, how believable it seems when they lose and regain control over their emotions. The paragraph about 'season of death;' that hits pretty close to home.

Author's Response: I was hoping someone reading would know what I was talking about regarding "a season of death." Sorry to hear about it hitting close to home. I've been going to more funerals and hearing about more deaths than weddings and births lately. Glad you enjoyed this first half so much and all the little details I included.

thursdayschild832005.08.27 - 11:22AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Yikes!! That was fantastic! I've been hanging out for an update on this story and you most definitely did not dissapoint. This is one of my all time favourites and I can not wait to see where you are taking this. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed ch38 so much. Your all time favorites? Gee (blushes furiously). Hope I keep up to your expectations.

spitfirecrackre2005.08.27 - 11:17AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
The tension just wafted off the screen! She is so mired in denial. Poor Hermione. I really hpe she doesn't flip when she finds out that it's Snape. But that's wishful thinking, non?

I'm hoping the statement on romantic languages is truee so I don't have to plough through Italian the way I'm doing with (basic, very, very basic) French.

Till the next and beyyoonnnnddd! *ponders on making joke about charging and lances but decides against and heads off to bed*

Author's Response: Wafting? Jellyfish waft, smells waft. Does tension waft? If you say so. Yeah, Hermione is figuratively placing her hands over her ears screaming, "LA, LA, LA, LA, LA, LA!!!" She'll have some reality to deal with when she realizes who Calleo is. Good night.


cryingoddess2005.08.27 - 10:15AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
*screams in frustration* Gods, Hermione really is thick isn't she? Hope she figures it out soon enough - it's killing me! Lovely chapter, very spicy. Update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, Hermione is pretty thick when it comes to this one bit of reality. She doesn't want her fantasy to end, she doesn't want to wake from her dream. Her curiosity has ruined one to many good things for her and she doesn't want to face reality. Don't worry, Hermione will figure out who Calleo is soon enough.

Keladry Lupin2005.08.27 - 09:45AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Wow. Both of these two chapters are unbelievably hot. I wonder if Hermione is going to begin to accept the possibility that Calleo is indeed Snape, or if she's going to continue to push that idea out of her mind. But she's made the connection now, so I'm hopeful.

I believe I remember him thinking that if he was going to tell Hermione who he really is, if she decides that she wants to go to bed with him. Will he still do so, or put his desires ahead of prudence? If she's so mulishly denying that Calleo could be Snape, then there's a chance that she's run away screaming if he does tell her the truth.

Okay, was the food Indian? You never said. Anyhoo, these were two magnificent chapters, as you very well know, Betz! Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to have gotten you hot under the collar. You'll have to wait and see how Hermione handles the realization that she's been dry-humping her old professor who is old enough to be her father.

You are correct. Snape will reveal himself before he fucks Hermione. He will come clean, if she doesn't realize who he is and confronts him first. The food was Morocccan, as stated near the begining of part 2.

Ago9162005.08.27 - 09:13AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Do you want to kill me? When do you update next? I love this story and I'm looking for more!!!

Author's Response: No, I'm not trying to kill you, I'm trying to make you squirm with sexual tension and anticipation. My 1st beta has chapter 38 - and I'm bringing in a new third beta, so I don't know how fast she works. Hopefully I'll have chapter 38 up by next weekend - I hope.

Kaairn2005.08.27 - 09:12AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
I absolutely love this story betz... it's incredibly well written, but like sglgiles... then tension is is killing me... ;) keep up the good work but please... give us some sort of release soon. *signs up to KbtTo"atdLHEA" *

Author's Response: Kindest thanks! Well written? I don't know, but if you enjoy it, then that's what counts. Don't worry, sexual tension of that calibur has probably passed, but I can't make any more promises that they won't come close again.

sglgiles2005.08.27 - 08:59AM38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2Signed
Ladies and Gentlemen. The first meeting of the KbtTo"atdLHEA" (Killed by the Tention of "And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After") is called to order. Can all members please remember to fill out their membership form and a copy of their death certificate. Thank you. Betz, you are evil, but I like you.

Author's Response: Oh dear. Maybe you should start a ATDLHEA Anonymous club and just give up a fic you are addicted to. ;-) I'm evil? Funny, my parents always said I was the good, sweet, compassionate one of the bunch. Now my one brother was pure evil and could have taught Slytherins something about psycological terror. I'm merely drawing out the experience, heightening the anticipation. I'm not evil, I'm just trying to make this more enjoyable.

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