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queenp2005.07.01 - 08:55AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
a most interesting chapter...those pesky voices in ones head can be rather annoying, can't they? So, what you are saying is...Severus is developing much stronger feelings about Hermione than he would have wanted...He refuses to acknowledge said feelings, however his mind refuses to refuse to acknowledge..Hmmm...As for Ron, what the heck has gotten into him? He's not this nice...he must be trying to cover stuff up...He's been having a fling and is scared of Hermione finding out...;) Maybe the "pub crawl" from last chapter?? And why didn't he tell his wife before this that he was making more money now? Did he want to keep her in the dark about it completely? He didn't acknowledge it until she mentioned it to him...Another coverup?? And the whole thing w/Ginny...when is Hermione going to admit to seeing Calleo? While she is in denial about it, deep down she knows, as is evidenced by the questions in her own mind and the questions Ginny asks, that Ginny DOES somehow know...She'll feel better if she just admits it...Well, I guess this is long enough...The chapter, as usual was great. Thank you for such a quick update. Please give us the next one soon, too...UPDATE and I promise, no more rotten tomatoes...:P

Author's Response: Yes, a conscience can be a terrible things at times, but it sometimes points us in the right direction. Yes, Severus is getting very attached to Hermione, against his own will. And who said Ron is being nice just to cover up anything? And why didn't he tell his wife about the raise? Because they don't talk anymore. More on that coming up in chapter 32. Why doesn't Hermione tell Ginny about Calleo? Cause she could see her friend going ballistic and calling her the hypocrit Hermione is denying that she is being. And I will update soon. Count on two chapters a week until HBP comes out, up through ch32.

Maela2005.07.01 - 08:02AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
Hmmm...me thinks Ron is feeling a little guilty. Oh! I just thought of something regarding....but if I'm right I don't want to give anything away. I guess I'll just have to keep my theory to myself. Update soon. ;)

Author's Response: You think Ron is feeling guilty? Perhaps. Then again, maybe somebody talked some sense into him...or not. More on the way soon, in fact, two chapters a week until HBP comes out.

angryplatypus2005.07.01 - 07:29AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
i love this story so much... the story, your character development, and even your author's notes! please keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, happy that you're enjoying it so much. More on the way soon.

LariLee2005.07.01 - 05:09AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
You always leave such great reviews that I feel really sorry the only thing I can bumblingly say is, "Write faster, please!" I want to know what Ron is up to. I want the four of them to get away happily. I wanted your title to be the beginning and not the end!
~Lisa

Author's Response: Well, you don't have to say "write faster" as I have up to ch32 written out already. I'll be posting twice a week until HBP comes out. Yes, you would like to know what Ron is up to. You'll have to wait and see if they all leave...or if no one leaves. (MUWAHAHAHA!) But the title refers to the fact that Hermione and Ginny married Ron and Harry after the end of the war and lead these fairytale lives, which they are not.

Gannet2005.07.01 - 04:22AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: You're welcome. More on the way soon.

GinnyW2005.07.01 - 04:01AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
I love the term "The prodigal husband returns". Ron is such a Prat in the story, it makes it hard for me to write him or see him in other fics. ;-)

I loved the convo with Severus, Dumbledore, & Minerva. Also, most interested in the interaction between Ginny and Hermione. I really wonder what Ginny will think of Hermione after she discovers that she and Calleo are having feelings for one another. I wish she'd say something and give Hermione another confident---it would be nice if she could trust her friend. I'm ready fore the next chapter! Gimmie, gimmie, gimmie! ~Ginny

Author's Response: Yeah, writing prat!Ron is going to make it hard to non-prat!Ron in the future. Glad you like the phrase.

Yeah, I liked the conversation Severus had with his old friends, too. Yes, it will be interesting to see Ginny's reaction upon learning how Severus feels about Hermione. More on the way soon.


HelluoLibrorum2005.07.01 - 03:02AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
Another great chapter! That was a fast update, too! Much appreciated! Your so right about Buffalo ribs, too! I've only been to Wyoming once though but I loved it!

Author's Response: I'm posting two chapters a week up through ch32, right before HBP comes out. Glad you liked the chapter.

Meredith2005.07.01 - 01:37AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
Ron is taking her dancing?? Interesting! Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yep...dancing. Like that makes it all better. Glad yo're enjoying it. More on the way soon.

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