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Rema2016.06.10 - 05:09PM79: "The Child Is Gone"Signed
I am enjoying this story immensley. I love all the details.

Author's Response: Thank you.

loreen772016.06.10 - 07:41AM79: "The Child Is Gone"Signed
Brava! That was one of my favorite chapters yet. I loved the Howler. I find meddling Molly very plausible and quite like to hate her in this story. Sometimes it is fun to take a characters flaws, blow them up to epic proportions and create a monster with them. I really enjoyed Pele information and learning more about the Hawaiian customs.

Author's Response: Yeah, so many stories paint Molly so saintly, but I find her a bit domineering. Her line in SS "Every year it's the same, Muggle everywhere" like were some damn infestation. Then she was bitchy to Hermione in GoF, reading Skeeter's lies. Yeah, she may be all maternal to Harry and loving, but it's not all roses with her. Glad you enjoyed the info on Hawaiian culture.

loreen772016.06.09 - 11:52PM78: “Friends, Food, and FlirtationSigned
Wonderful party. I remember my excitement at 13 and going to a real luau in Kauai. Thanks for bringing back some great times I had not thought of in years.

Author's Response: When my husband and I were on our honeymoon in Kialua-Kona, there was a local luau and hula recital going on at the community center, and passing by we were welcomed to come join. I think there was a small fee for a potluck dinner plate and we watched a hula school recital. It was a huge influence on how I wrote this chapter and everyone being very welcoming and relaxed.

paddiew2016.06.09 - 05:39PM79: "The Child Is Gone"Signed
I got behind...read the last three chapters today. Love seeing everything come together. The details from Hawaii are wonderful. Thank you to you and your lovely betas, I enjoy their own stories too.

Author's Response: Yes, everything is pulling together for Draco, Ginny and even Severus (mostly). We have a wedding coming up in a few chapters, so that will bring some resolution to Draco and Ginny's story.

karmen_912016.06.09 - 08:18AM79: "The Child Is Gone"Signed
I like the way you portrayed Molly. I've always thought her to be like that. I like reading your story so much, that today when I reached the middle of the chapter I stopped reading for 2 hours, so I could prolong the experience... XD Great chapter again, I love the fact that they are in the Hawaiis, I hope to see Hermione with them, and may be even Harry as a friend with his new loved one. I like Kingsley too and greatly dislike Moody, who killed Pansy? I don't think you mentioned the name not even once, just that it is a public figure. Thank you!! I can't wait for the next chapters.

Author's Response: As much as Rowling portrays Molly as this loving mother figure from Harry's perspective, they way she treats Hermione for that period of time in GoF after the Skeeter gossip was just telling she's not all sweetness and roses. As for Harry, time will tell. And you noticed I never names Pansy's killer? Good. You'll find out though, you just have to wait a bit.

loreen772016.06.09 - 05:02AM77: "Jumbo Cockroach Clusters" Signed
Another brilliant chapter. Running off to the next.......

loreen772016.06.08 - 09:57PM76: "Sarcasm and Jazz Hands"Signed
Luna is always a breath of fresh air. I his loved her here.

Author's Response: Oh, my favorite line from Luna, in my fic, comes at the end of chapter 99 - last paragraph. It's proof of why she's so friggin' awesome! Wish I could share it, but that would be spoilers. Just make a note of it to yourself.

jenn2016.06.08 - 09:52PM79: "The Child Is Gone"Signed
This story is fabulous!! Loving all the detail but I want Hermione and Severus back together again. Love the touch with the scorch marks though.

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