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cocoachristy2005.05.17 - 11:57PM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
GRRR! LOL! I just KNEW that with all that potions talk and with no scarf she would be able to put two and two together!!! We are talking about Hermione here, the cleverest witch of her age!!!
I think she should stop by Ron's work one day and see him cheating (I know he is ;-) ) and then catch Calleo unaware and MAYBE he could forget his mask?? No?? Ok< just at thought!! Great chapter as usual, I cannot help I am very impatient and really wished they would've kissed...
More up soon, please??

Author's Response: Why hasn't Hermione put two and two together? I will get to that once the pieces start falling into place..or once she allows herself to recognize the signs. I will elaborate on it later when Hermione starts going through the process of realization.

Yes, yes, yes, it would be easier and lemonier for Severus to reveal himself and Hermione to finally come to the terms with the fact she has the hots for her old teacher. But would it be believable? No. This is a slow cooker of a fic. Patience.

GinnyW2005.05.17 - 11:33PM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
A few days later, and I still love this! I just want them to kiss, though. *sigh* Severus is so in denial over this! Poor sod! Okay, which chapter am I rooting for now for their next meeting? Is she now going to be showing up on his doorstep when Ron is being a prat or when she's lonely? Or do we have to wait for the next Thursday night 'date'...b/c it truly was a date! Quite adimit about that...heck no money is changing hands either! LOL! Gotta be a date! Please update soon, Betz! I love this story. ~Ginny

Author's Response: You reviewed twice...therefore, I will put twice as much dark chocolate on my shrine to Severus in your honor. He's very happy...very OOC, but he's so blissed out on chocolate, he doesn't care.

Yeah, Severus is in denial. But in time you will learn why he's in denial...(big hints in chapter 28). Still haven't written the next "date" yet, so I can't tell you what chapter to look out for. Hermione will be tempted to show up on Calleo's doorstep on other nights...if she willl remains to be seen. And you are right, it was a date...it started becoming so once the issue of coin was removed (ANOTHER BIG HINT!).

pickles2005.05.17 - 11:27PM23: “A Conclave on Cassoulet"Signed
geez how did i get so far behind. well better get a move on. p

Author's Response: HURRY UP...and wait. No rush, it'll be a while till 26 is up, as it's still with my 2nd beta and I'm not sure when she'll send it back.

rheniel2005.05.17 - 05:50PM24: “When Ingredient-Testing Witches Get the Blues”Signed
Simply wonderful story! I love the way you portray Snape, especially his chats with "Albus" and "Minerva". I wonder when Hermione will find out that Lavender and Ron are shagging? (unless, of course, I've guessed wrong...)

Author's Response: Thank you for your praise. Yes, I do love the little chats Severus has with his "friends". And what makes you think Ron is shagging anyone else?

Winna2005.05.16 - 12:27PM24: “When Ingredient-Testing Witches Get the Blues”Signed
The name Trevor Spawn made me giggle; he was a lot like frog slime, wasn’t he? I was hoping Hermione would hex him, but I guess she’s got plenty of time to do so after he gets hired. I had to work with the boss’s son once in a similar situation, meaning I worked enough for two and he played at being the boss’s son.

I can understand why Hermione wants to work things out with Ron, but really, I hope the counselor shows them that it’s OK to outgrow each other. Of course, I think they have no business being together even in canon, so I’m probably the wrong person to judge them 8-P. Thanks for the update, and the lovely raspberry dressing recipe; I plan on trying it out tonight.

Author's Response: Yes, he is a slimy little toad. Trevor is Madam Dushka's new favorite, so Hermione has to be careful on that front. We'll see how counseling goes. Unfortunately, I think Rowling has plans for those two to get together. But we can always break them up in canon and pair her with Severus in fanon.


Winna2005.05.16 - 12:14PM23: “A Conclave on Cassoulet"Signed
Great chapter! I like how everyone is commenting on how out of character Hermione is acting. I’m finding this story to be very realistic, sometimes depressingly so.

I don’t recall if I ever mentioned this in past reviews, so I’ll say it here now: I think Lavender is hooking up with Ron. She seems to have a vested interest in getting Hermione together with Severus, she became suddenly upset with Dolohov, and she was evasive when commenting on how she knew Ron went back to Hermione. I’m not expecting any comment on that, I just wanted to get that written down so I can gloat if I’m right or laugh about it if I’m completely wrong. And now I see that there’s another chapter, so off I go…

Author's Response: Thank you, for the fact you find it realistic, I find very complimentary. Yes, it is rather depressing. You could be right with your theory or you could be completely wrong, only time will tell.


ook2005.05.16 - 08:48AM23: “A Conclave on Cassoulet"Signed
w.r.t. the Welsh: Make it "goch" and not "gosh" on the end and you're there. It won't make sense to a Welsh-speaker but, as I guess you're not Welsh-speaking, you've sensibly ducked on aiming for that.

Lana Manckir2005.05.16 - 12:18AM23: “A Conclave on Cassoulet"Signed
How sad about Pavarti! I'm curious to know what else Lavender is hiding and God! when will Hermione realize he is Severus? I know I know, things have to go slow, but I was never very good at waiting ;-)

Author's Response: Yes, it is very sad about Parvati. When will Hermione realize it's Severus? Ah...all in good time, but enjoy the slow boat to UST in the mean time. Half the fun is the journey to a destination. Patience.

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