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Red Writing Hood2005.07.12 - 07:07PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Those two should have only remained as friends. They are not going to survive this marriage emotionally intact. I feel sorry for those two. Still, fantastic chapter...as always. Red

GinnyW2005.07.12 - 06:21PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Poor Hermione! First that dream, which I took to be a mixture of reality and fantasy----as the best dreams are! ;-) And also her mind placing Calleo at Hogwarts, the mental gymnastics are at work to help her realize who he is. Then the interaction between Hermione & Ron. There is no recovering from that one. I'm surprised he didn't leave the apartment then and there to go running off with some hot young witch where he felt appreciated. I do think her yelling at him to be quiet was a little over the top for behaviour, BUT it certainly isn't beyond a sexually frustrated woman. I feel sorry for her and he should've had some consideration for her and her needs too. I anxiously awaiting more! ~Ginny

Author's Response: Hermione yelling at him over the top? She's so sexually frustrated, she's in the process of snapping. First a hot sex dream interrupted and then sex grinds to a halt jsut before she comes? I'm surprised she didn't hit Ron with a SIlencing charm followed by a complete body bind to keep him stiff and immobile till she could come. Ron is lucky she didn't hex his balls off or give him a flaming urinary tract infection hex just to spite him. I think yelling was the least she would do in this circumstance. Do you know what it's like to be THAT sexually frustrated? Yes, Hermioine's mind is putting a few clues together in her dreams.

pickles2005.07.12 - 06:03PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
another excellent chapter. I like Hermione working out her energy. But what happened to Ron. Was he to "stunned" to move? lol... have a great week. waiting for more.. Sure you couldn't sneak a chapter or two in before friday night??? p

Author's Response: What do you think Ron did? He probably wanked himself and then went back to sleep. Chapter 33 is with my first beta right now, so I don't think I'll be able to post before HBP comes out. Thanks for your enthusiasm, though.

Anijade2005.07.12 - 05:50PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Ok I know I told you this before but Ron is an ass and a horrible husband. I know there won't be an update until after the release but please consider killing him or something so she can feel better

Author's Response: Yes, Ron is a complete tosser at times. There is no character death in this fic. I know, I know, you want to kill him so badly. If I was Hermione and had a great sex dream ruined like that and then possibly the best shag I ever had so far interrupted like that, I'd kill him too.

Antagonist Len2005.07.12 - 05:48PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Just don't you dare abandon this great fic. No matter what happens in HBP.

Author's Response: I will not abandon this fic. I've put too much time and enrgy to drop it just like that. Even if after HBP things go very AU and OOC, I will still complete it. Even if I wrap it up by writing:
"Hermione realized what a tosser her husband was. So she went to Calleo and proposed they run away together to another country. Severus revealed himself to Hermione who was thrilled that she had fallen for a man who could shag her like a demon. And they lived the rest of their days fucking their brains out."

Gannet2005.07.12 - 05:28PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Two updates in a single day! You're spoiling us (not that anybody's complaining, on the contrary!) Thank you for writing!

Author's Response: Thank Ashwinder, as they pushed ch32 so quickly.

pickles2005.07.12 - 05:28PM31: “Thou Art Fishified”Signed
good chapter. onto the next.

Author's Response: Thanks. Enjoy the next chapter, as it's the last until HBP comes out.

queenp2005.07.12 - 05:08PM32: “My Husband the Stranger”Signed
Oh, my...this was an amazing chapter...*blushing upon realization that it is said every chapter* but I stand by that description. I love this story.

I must agree with Hermione that waking up from the incredible sex dream only to have it dashed by hubby SUCKS!!!!! However, she handled it very well...*grin*

I don't suppose I'd get quite as lucky again in a request for another update this time..? I suppose that since the book is out in just a few days...*cough:4:cough* I can let you have a SHORT break..but not more than a week *grin* I expect updates...*snicker* As soon as possible, please!!

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you still love my fic. Yes, few things suck as much as a great sex dream ruined...the only thing worse is being in themiddle of sex and stopping just before you orgasm.

Chapter 33 iswith my 1st beta right now. Updates will be slowing down now, but Ill still try to do a chapter a week.

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