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queenp2005.07.05 - 09:33AM29: “The Travails of Training Trevor"Signed
A most excellent chapter....I'm still wanting to know who Ron is cheating with...Can't wait to see the dance lessons beginning. I love this story, Betz. Please update again soon!!!

Author's Response: Kindest thanks for your praise of my efforts. Are you certain Ron is cheating? Yes, dance lessons...Mmmmm, drool, drool, drool. So glad you are enjoying my fic. Another chapter will be up in a few days.

pickles2005.07.05 - 08:23AM29: “The Travails of Training Trevor"Signed
Thank you for a new chappy Betz.. It was great. Waiting with anticipation for the next chapter "DANCING".... love to dance... lol have a great week.

Author's Response: Thanks, pickles! So glad you enjoy this chapter. Yes, dancing with Severus....be still my beating heart! More on the way soon.

Maela2005.07.05 - 07:09AM29: “The Travails of Training Trevor"Signed
Poor Severus. He just can't believe someone would actually want to spend time with him when they know his real identity. Just was is Ron up to....this chapter actually solidified an idea I had about him. Poor Hemione...being reject by Ron! :( Update soon.

Author's Response: Yes, it's the pessimist in him. You'll see more fo that attitude in chapter 31. And what makes you think Ron is up to anything? Just because he rejected Hermione's touch does not mean anything. He could still be angry with her over her comments about him being a lousy lay...or not. More on the way in a few days.

Gannet2005.07.05 - 07:05AM29: “The Travails of Training Trevor"Signed
Thank you for the update!

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for leaving a review, even a short one.

Jana2005.07.05 - 06:37AM29: “The Travails of Training Trevor"Signed
Yay! Finally they're going to see eachother again. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your enthusiasm. Yes, I'll be posting ch30 on Wednesday, so it'll take a day or two to clear the queue.

GreyDragonne2005.07.03 - 11:11PM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
This story has me hooked still- I can't wait to see what comes next, and I hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Oh good! I haven't lost you yet. Another chapter is already in the queue. Count on two updates a week up through chapter 32, just before HBP comes out.

Aurealis2005.07.03 - 06:38PM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
Oh my gosh, you are so right on about how girls that age dress. That whole scene where Hermoine doesn't recognize the Muggle World anymore was so funny as to be actually truthful. So maybe I don't think Ron is having an affaire with Lavender anymore... But it still seems like he was fantasizing about someone else the other night in bed. Also, I really like how you're dragging out Hermione's lying to Ginny... and in return, Ginny's lying to Hermione by playing ignorant to the Calleo situation. It's deliciously convoluted!

Author's Response: Yes, the low slung hip hugger makes me cringe. I'm old enough to remember how bad they looked like in the 70's and they don't look any better today. Add to the fact that those pants make even the most underweight girl look like she has a fat ass and I think we have a candidate for worst fashion trend of the new millenium. Hermione does not think Ginny would take the news well that she is seeing a gigolo, despite the fact Ginny is seeing one too - though Draco was her almost-boyfriend years ago. From the way Draco and Severus broke the news to Ginny about Hermione's visits, Hermione is right, but Ginny accepts the idea knowing it's Hermione's own way to try and save her marriage.

excessivelyperky2005.07.03 - 01:00AM28: “Bright Lights, Big Bookstore"Signed
I can get ground buffalo and some buffalo cuts at the local Fred Meyer's for a few weeks every autumn--you have to cook it slower than beef, because it's drier, but it's still pretty good. (PETA wouldn't like where I live, either). Good chapter. Wonder if Ron is feeling guilty because he's doing a little more than dance lessons with Rogina? (perks up)

Author's Response: Yes, we have ground buffalo available at our local market too, but none of the other cuts. It makes a damn good burger, lower in cholesterol than turkey. What makes you think Ron is feeling guilty? Yes, he could be having a little affair with Rogina, or he could be just having some dance lessons offered by his boss' wife so he's won't make a fool of himself on his anniversary by dancing badly.

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