Ashwinder :: To bewitch the mind and ensnare the senses

Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After

Horserider	2005.12.04 - 09:52PM	47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”	Signed
One of your very best so far, I'm bouncing like a ferret waiting for chapter 47! :D ~HR Author's Response: The best so far? (SQUEEK!) Thanks! Can't wait to see what you think of chapter 47.

midnightshadows	2005.12.04 - 09:45PM	47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”	Signed
Hehehe I was right he did intend on giving Hermione a massage. Porr woman sexually frustrated and Ron being a prat about it. You would think that for someone of Hermione's brains and personallity that Ron would realise saying that she 'owes' him would not go down well. But then again poor Ron is having a Hard time dealing with it. I don't think that he is cheating on Hermione although if he was it would make things eiaser but i don't see him doing that kind of thing...however I believe that he might just be taking steriods. Silly git. Oh and lets not forget Severus in this. Going to those lengths to only end up being a peeping tom and going back to the greesy git! hehe oh if only i could cuddle him for a moment, then let him make a sarcastic commment, have a fight, and then have wonderful make up sex. stops dreaming oh right. Catch up with you next you update ^^ Author's Response: Yeah, poor Hermione. She just needs to get laid. Well, you know how some men are, just have to open their mouth and ruin the moment. A case of "Open Mouth Wider and Insert Other Foot" syndrome. Yeah, poor Severus. I just want to cuddle and pet my Snape plushie and tell him it will be all right (I just wish I had a Snape plushie).

spitfirecrackre

2005.12.04 - 09:11PM

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Ron sounds like he's totally gone round the bend. Either that or he's a Polyjuiced version! ;)

Peeping Snape is all well and good but even he realised it was rather pathetic. Poor Snape. He's seriously grasping at straws. I really wish the anniversary dance would be over and a resolution reached. The main characters aren't the only ones feeling the tension! :)

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Well, he's a bit tense....sexually and wound up on his supplements. Yep, even Snape knows that he's sinking to new levels. Thank you. The next chapter is currently with my betas, so more is on the way.

Rave_n1	2005.12.04 - 09:01PM	47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”	Signed
NO... Not revenge nookie!!!! Author's Response: OH YES! Vengeance Shag!!!

droxy	2005.12.04 - 09:00PM	47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”	Signed
definately no happy people here..the tension and angst is unbeable! Which is what I beleive you are trying to achieve. Author's Response: Nope....there's a whole lot of unhappiness being spread around. Yes, I am trying to get my characters to their breaking points, which is just about what they are at right now.

Keladry Lupin	2005.12.04 - 08:55PM	47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”	Signed
Well, that does it. Hermione seems to have made up her mind already. And Ron's on steroids; that's just lovely. The names for the toys were hilarious, especially the little one with the references to Percy. The tension is killing me, Betz, but I can wait. Maybe. Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Well, it does seem that she's made up her mind, but she's waiting to be nobel and hold true to her original promise to herself. Glad you loved the toys. Next chapter is with my betas, so it's on the way. Thanks.

Antagonist Len	2005.12.04 - 08:42PM	47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”	Signed
Nononono... This looks like it's going to go bad soon. I can agree with Hermione, the next chapter will take forever to come. But she's in a bad way off to make a big mistake... Be nice to her ;) Author's Response: Yep, this could go either way...perfect or perfectly horrible. I have no control over Hermione, she's off on her own little adventure, I just write down what she does.

Alarase	2005.12.04 - 08:27PM	47: “Freely Given, But Not For Sale”	Signed
OH wow I'm looking forward to the next (two?) chapters. The dinner, and her decision, anyway. I'm super annoyed at ron. Unhappy or not in a marriage, he's a git! But yea....update soon! This is your most excellent chapter in a while,really leaves me anticipating the next bits!! Author's Response: The next chapter is the anniversary chapter. It's so huge, I'll have to post in two parts. Yep, Ron's a git here, and he was a big git in HBP too, so I'm just sticking to canon. ;-) Glad to give you a bit of enjoyment.

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