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racheldiego2005.05.24 - 08:52PM4: "Mea Culpa, Mea Culpa, Mea Maxima Culpa" (My Sin, My Sin, My Most Grievous Sin) Signed
I see Ginny's dilema . Oh wow-- wonderful authors note. It really hit a chord with me. Its exactly what I am searching for. my mother loves my father, but she is not IN love with him. And I want to be In love. I hope it is possible to find it!

Author's Response: Glad the concept makes sense to you. I hope at least your mother is happy with your father. I thought love would never come my way, but it hit me at the most unexpected time, so it will probably come to you too. Sometimes you just have to wait a little while.

Nosferatas2005.05.22 - 05:39AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
I really don't know what to say... It's brilliant. Please update soon!!! Greets Nosferatas

Author's Response: Thrilled you enjoyed it so much. Soon as my second beta finshes her finals (or maybe sooner), more will be on the way.

spitfirecrackre2005.05.20 - 10:13AM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Whoa. I got all hot and bothered too during 'The Massage Scene'..........

and then I got hungry when he served the food. -_-'''

It just occured to me, y'know? Everytime I read this fic, I'm munching some food. Not good for the waistline, that.....not good at'all!

Looking forward to the next chapter when (hopefully, bad me, I know) Hermione and Ron break-up already. (realisticality be damned. ) Ok fine, just kidding. Just don't forget the food refs! ;)

Author's Response: Yes, food is a supporting character in this fic, what with all the food they eat and all the food puns and references in the chapter summaries. Hmmmm, the massage...many more opportunities coming up for more massages. ;-) Glad you're enjoying my fic.


Lana Manckir2005.05.19 - 10:37PM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Wow, talk about sexual tension! This chapter was very sensual and they were barely touching! Can't wait for more, thanks for the fast updates and here I sit and wait, well, bouncing off the walls it's more likely ;-)

Author's Response: Taht is exactly the effect I'm shooting for..sexual tension that could cut steel and no one did anything. You may have to wait a little bit for the next chapter, as I've been pushing my betas and they are a bit taxed, having missed a few things that the mods caught. Chapters should be coming out a bit faster once my one beta finishes finals and the other one is not quite so busy her her foal and mare. However, my second beta jsut may send me over a chapter soon if she gets a little spare time on her hands.

Fury2005.05.19 - 04:18PM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Oh, my. The plot thickens, as does the tension, the heat the steam... Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. More is on the way, just let my one beta get through her finals unharrassed. Don't worry, school is almost over for her.

Barbara2005.05.19 - 04:13PM25: “My Dinner with Calleo"Signed
Compliments for you, Betz and your marvellous betas for creating such a wonderful tale in spite of demanding real live.
Your story is always so well researched (thank you for sharing the background in your A/N's). This time Hermione's experiment has me hooked on - with the possible chain reaction you implied. Just great!
Can't Severus come over for a quick massage? He has to strengthen his hands anyway ... just to turn his focus off Hermione, so you can slowly build up your story. :-) - Barbara

Author's Response: Researched? I just pull this stuff out of my ass and search the internet for proof to back me up. ;-) Yes, the Ashwinder eggconnection provides a great array of possibilities.

Trevor is going to make Hermione very tense, so there is always the possibility of a full body massage from *Calleo*.

Barbara2005.05.19 - 03:49PM24: “When Ingredient-Testing Witches Get the Blues”Signed
OMG - Trevor Spawn? Trevor brings unvolutatily memories of Nevilles toad ... although a mixture of Lockhart and Draco surely wouldn't remind me of a toad ;-)
Maybe she will be able to argue the increasing loss of testing ingredients to the incompetence of Trevor? Trevor as the bosses' darling surely won't get into trouble just because some restricted ingredients have vanished?
Well, Hermione has really hurt Ron, hasn't she? Just wonder if they will be getting closer again; at the moment it't very much like the "cold war".
The letter: Hermione not even thinks "Haven't I seen this writing somewhere ...?" She's really clueless.
Anticipation is building. Thank god one more chapter to read tonight! - Barbara

Author's Response: Yes, Neville's toad is exactly the type of imagery you should think of with regards to Trevor Spawn. Just as some frogs are princes in disguise, some wizards who look like princes are actually toads. Think about it.

Of course there will be a problem with the flow of tested ingredients now that Mr. Spawn is on the job. And disappearing ingredients? Haven't thought about it, but it could happen. Might have to incorporate that into the story, thanks for the idea (hope you don't mind if I use it, if the plot calls for it).

Yes, Ron is still bent out of shape from their fight, but in time he will attempt to mend some bridges. Watch for chapter 28.

Seveus' handwriting...well, it has been 5 years since she's seen his handwriting. And think about it. When you're pissed and surly, doesn't your handwriting come a bit hastily scrawled? When you are irritated by someone who obviously did not pay atention to class, are you going to be a bit more impatient writing you remarks than sitting down and writting a carefully crafted letter to a friend? Don't worry, in time she will compare handwriting samples and see similarities. Now no more hints!

Barbara2005.05.19 - 03:34PM23: “A Conclave on Cassoulet"Signed
Another question popped just up in my mind.
Besides, you know what a pariah she would be if she divorced him. - From your earlier chapters I came to the understanding that divorce is not regarded as something -so very -bad. What she read in those books at Flourish & Blott's didn't suggest (in my eyes)that divorced women are 'outcasts'. - Barbara

Author's Response: Divorce is not bad per se, but since it is so uncommon, it is looked down upon...much like women with children out of wedlock in the early 20th century...think of it that way. Well, they would say women with children out of wedlock are wicked and going to hell a hundred years ago, but you get the point. Divorce does occur, it's just "not talked about".

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