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pickles2005.06.22 - 11:19AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Thank you Betz for the new chapter.. Are Snape & Mione creating a "special bound" with their visits? enjoying very much. must go get children ready for storytime at the library.. patty

Author's Response: No, Hermione and Snape are not creating a special a special bond with one another...not in a magical way, but one through friendship and affections. Read a nice story to the kids...they'll remember that when they're older.

queenp2005.06.22 - 09:52AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
a most excellent chapter...even if it did take too long...So, when is Ginny going to admit to Hermione that she knows about Calleo? Her subtle attempts arent' working, after all...Can't wait to see what you have in store next...I love this story...now, off to see the picture..

Author's Response: When is Ginny going to admit to Hermione she knows about Calleo? Only when Severus says she can! She knows never to cross a man like him! No, her subtle attempts are not working and she's about to get a dressing down if she doesn't back off. Don't forget to leave a nice review for Melanie on her site too!

Maela2005.06.22 - 08:46AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Love, love, love this story. thanks for the update. Me thinks Severus is falling hard. And I can't wait for him to see Hermione in her new robes. I do hope you'll let us know where Ron was for a week. I suspect at a girlfriends house since he's not trying to be with Hermione. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: You think Severus is falling for Hermione...what ever gave you *that* clue? (whistles innocently) I will try to update as soon as I can. Thanks.

spitfirecrackre2005.06.22 - 06:58AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
GREAT to see an update from you and thanks for the same!

I found how Ginny was testing the waters with Hermione (no pun intended) quite unfair. After all, Hermione had not told a soul about her[Ginny's] relationship with Draco.

I found the scenes where Snape and Hermione pleasured themselves to the thoughts of each other. It even seemed as if there was some kinda 'secret' hazy screen that was separating them.

I got confused by the "knock up" part,so thanks for the 'xplainin'

Till the next chapter and here's wishing that either Siren/Horserider can ride the troubled period and get through ok.

And a hi to JuneW!

Author's Response: Yes, it was rather unfair for Ginny to push Hermione like that, but she had her reasons. Yes, it seemed as there was some sort of "connection" between them...just as I was hoping for. Thanks, glad you still enjoying my fic.


mugglegirl09082005.06.22 - 04:04AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Oh Betz what a lovely chapter. I've been waiting to see the scene in Melanie's art work played out. It turned out great. I'm glad you incorporated the nail polish. Imagining Severus and Draco trying facial masks and nail polish is just too cute...and funny. I love it.

The illustration by Lana is just gorgeous, too. It's so cool that they chose an illustration of your fic to put on WIKTT's homepage! You'll probably attract new readers with that.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. What I liked about it is the feeling I got during the "changing room scene" when Severus and Hermione were...er, you know. No, not that kind of feeling *snicker*, I'm talking about the impression I'm getting that they are both attracted to each other and becoming, well...dependent on one another. Well, I don't know that I like using the word "dependent," but it's the best word I can think of to describe the way they both find comfort and support in the other's presence. Hermione finds escape from her lousy marriage, and Severus finds a way to escape his frustrating life (by using her to do it), and they both get the academic stimulation they need. Anyway, I'm loving the tension building between them. It'll be interesting to see how much longer they are able to hold out...hehe *evil smirk*

Author's Response: Yeah...being forced to do something so vain and...feminine jsut seems a riot. Oh, what those two must suffer! Boy, I'd like to suffer with facials, manicures and a day at the spa every month!

Yeah, I was pretty thrilled to realize that Lana's pic was from my story. I had no clue till I read her comments as posted on Illusions. I feel deeply honored by that.

Yes, you are correct, they are both feeling drawn to one another. Yeah, it will be interesting to see just how much longer they can both hold out...tension, temptation, and a test of one's will power will certainly be par for the course for these two.

LadyJade862005.06.22 - 03:51AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
Hey great chapter!! Guess what.... I made the rasberry salad dressing you sugjested in chapter 24 and it was really good.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the salad dressing. Just wait till chapter 30...more food recipes.

Lana Manckir2005.06.22 - 02:16AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
I love the image of Sev's toes with nail polisher, LOL cute! When is Hermione going to stop being a prude and realize there is no hope for neither Ginny's or her marriage? What's so wrong about divorce? LOL sorry but I'm one of those people who doesn't believe in marriage counseling. I loved the chapter, I'm only sad it's over already :-( btw thanks for linking to my drawing.

Author's Response: Yeah, the polish on the toes is a real kicker! That was Melanie's idea. WHen will Hermione realize that it's pointless? Soon, soon. She will have a sort of...epiphany. What is wroing with divorce? Nothing is wrong with it in the Muggle world, but this is the wizarding world we are talking about. More on the whole "divorce thing" in upcoming chapters...relates to Tom Riddle and his mum. MUWAHAHAHA! You're welcome for the link to your illustration. I'm the one who should thank you for drawing it.

Sokudo Ningyou2005.06.22 - 01:19AM26: “Beauty Is Only Potions Deep"Signed
New chapter! Glee! Now you must update more frequently again.

Author's Response: I will update as fast as my betas can work...no bugging them!

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