Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| Kate McGuire | 2004.12.13 - 10:38PM | 10: “Dead Men Walking” | Signed |
| Keep writing, I check constantly for the update |
| DayLightDancer | 2004.12.13 - 10:25PM | 10: “Dead Men Walking” | Signed |
| Kris. hahahahaha oh thats great!! cant wait for next chapter!!!! |
| RachelW | 2004.12.13 - 10:20PM | 10: “Dead Men Walking” | Signed |
| Good chapter. Sad how Harry and Ginny had spent so long not talking...lack of communication would certainly lead them to where they're at. And, on Hermione cleaning up, it's just a few swishes and flicks...it really is just easier to do it yourself, than it is to wait for someone who obviously has lesser standards of cleanliness to do it. Really, personal experience, things got better around here when I quit gritting my teeth and waiting for hubby to take out the freaking trash already...I'm more likely to remember, and it's one less thing to get upset about. |
| tisasil | 2004.12.13 - 09:20PM | 10: “Dead Men Walking” | Signed |
If I had bothered to look next to the chapters I wpuld have seen that you had another chapter ready. Duh!
I'm still greedy and want more. Oh to wait till you update again.
One little thing, not a flame. You had the word absolution when I think you meant ablution.
Author's Response: Yes, you are correct, thank you for catchin gthat - though absolutions would also be a proper word in this setting. Remember the flagellation? CURSE YOU SPELL CHECK! |
| LariLee | 2004.12.13 - 09:20PM | 10: “Dead Men Walking” | Signed |
| Oh Betz, I so want a happy ending on this... Wonderfully done! ~Lisa |
| tisasil | 2004.12.13 - 08:38PM | 9: "Morning Has Broken" | Signed |
| I want more!! I feel like when I've had a great piece of dessert and I still want more.
When I read Dorian Loop I immediately knew why, very witty of you.
I celebrate Hannukah and accept belated presents....like additional chapters. ;) |
| Aurealis | 2004.12.13 - 08:10PM | 10: “Dead Men Walking” | Signed |
| Good stuff. The story was well paced and carried both storylines easily. |
| Piggie | 2004.12.13 - 08:05PM | 10: “Dead Men Walking” | Signed |
| hmmmm, never heard of Ruddles myself - the best name of beer i ever heard was 'Waggle Dance' beer - i love the word Waggle.
Other wise good chapter - I fathomed the London/Tower bridge mistake, considering that London Bridge actually isn't in London anymore, it was bought by american and transported brick by brick there. Don't ask as I don't know!
Piggie |
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