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| britt | 2005.08.27 - 07:40PM | 38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2 | Signed |
| Oooo ... i just had to leave a comment. the frustration is brilliant! you litterally keep me on the edge of my seat, and i love the idea of the blindfold. oh, the draw of romantic mystery. and i can totally related to this story.
so well done! Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the tension and anticipation. Thank you. More on the way. | |||
| queenp | 2005.08.27 - 05:48PM | 38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2 | Signed |
| *sigh* Excellent work...loved these two chapters...more please... Author's Response: Thank you. Actually, it was one chapter, it was just so long, I had to post in two parts as Ashwinder has a chapter limit of 11,000 words. | |||
| Nichalia | 2005.08.27 - 05:24PM | 38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2 | Signed |
| Haha, poor Hermione. I wonder how long she'll be able to delude herself. Author's Response: How much longer can she live in denial? Hmmm, stay tuned. Chapter 38 could show the cracks in her little glass menagerie. | |||
| Aurealis | 2005.08.27 - 05:08PM | 38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2 | Signed |
| ..."it was some other black-haired wizard with a prominent nose" and deep sexy voice. Author's Response: Yep, but will Hermione still think it's sexy when she figures out who Calleo really is? | |||
| Moyra | 2005.08.27 - 05:05PM | 38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2 | Signed |
| What an absolutely wonderful, long chap!! Virtuoso, how you managed the roller coaster of friendly conversation and erotic tension. Let’s see: the question-game confirmed their friendship, come what may; it gave Calleo also the possibility for more hints about his true self; as well as with the massage (btw, I was rather thankful that you didn’t make him a “scarred skin” as so much). But she’s so very deep in denial, it’s nearly unbelievable that she didn’t make the connection. What will be the final piece in the whole puzzle to make her realise that Calleo is Severus? But perhaps there won’t be any last piece? Because… uh, guesses, guesses … yes - she makes up her mind until Monday about bringing the things any further (probably with the involuntarily “help” of Ron – uh, by the way, I find your hint astonishing that she’s not even playing with the idea to leave Ron) without guessing Calleo=Severus, and than he has to reveal himself, because he will not sleep with her without her knowledge who he is? And then? Shocked Hermione will be unable to do anything … (bang head on the table) Anyway, the sensual encounter in the kitchen as well as on the settee was amazingly written. I enjoyed the whole two chaps so very much, they were really fantastic!!! Last but not least and a little bit late: thousands congratulations to your winning of the Multifaceted Awards (I like it when some of my choices are with the winners… lol) Author's Response: (Takes a bow and blushes!) So glad I was able to thoroughly entertain you so much! Yes, they played Q&A, but Hermione hold true to her word once she realizes it's Snape? That scar on his back is part of the same set he got from Lucius' slicing hex - that landed him in the infirmary. Yep, Hermione just can't seem to admit what's right before her. Don't worry, Hermione will realize things soon enough and that's when the real fun begins. So glad you enjoyed both interludes with temptation. And thank you, I'm still kind of surprised I won. | |||
| queenp | 2005.08.27 - 04:29PM | 37: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 1 | Signed |
| *whimper* Author's Response: You okay, honey? Hope you survived. | |||
| Winna | 2005.08.27 - 02:47PM | 37: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 1 | Signed |
| Whew! Can't stop to comment now, must read part 2!!! | |||
| cathmorgan5 | 2005.08.27 - 01:27PM | 38: “Dancing Around the Truth” Part 2 | Signed |
| These chapters are great! I love this story. Count me in as a member of the KbtTo"atdLHEA" club, but it's torture worth enduring.
Hermione isn't just wrapped in denial, she's deliberately slamming the door on the truth right in front of her ... i love the way you work that thread. I hope her increase in curiosity will lead her to.... what, find out more from Ginny? let herself mellow on the possiblity of Snape? It's a relief as a reader that Hermione sets a deadline on a decision to get more involved. Despite what Severus said chapters ago about revealing his identify before allowing intimacy, I wonder if she might specifically ask him/allow him to make love to her as Calleo. A nice thought, but I'm guessing that you'll allow us no such easy enjoyment. Can I beg?
By the way, does the use of almond oil have a special meaning?
Looking forward to learning more about all the plot threads. Author's Response: Another member? My goodness! These chapters are supposed to inspire you to go ravish your spouses or significant others, not die of anticipation. If no s/o is available, that's what vibrators are for. You are correct in observing Hermione's state of denial. It's the mental hands over the ears while chanting "la, la, la, la!" very loudy. Don't worry, Hermione will realize who Calleo is soon enough and all the pieces will fall into place. No, Snape will not shag Hermione while posing as Calleo. If there is to me any more intimacy, Snape will make sure Hermione knows it's him. No, the almod ooil has no such special meaning, but it can be used as a massage oil and smells quite nice. | |||
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