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Sooz2005.02.04 - 04:50PM16: “In the Heat of the Night”Signed
This just gets better and better....but dammit! She is right next to him! Why didn't she just take a peek? I know, I know. The story would suck if she did. Cannot wait for your next update. Thanks for this chapter. Susan

Author's Response: Ah, but you are forgetting one of the rules I laid down in this challenge. "Anticipation." I mean, how gret would it be if they shagged from page one. So much better to have the slow, torturous journey so that first kiss, that single press of body angainst body is as hot as any PWP you've read. UST (unresolved sexual tension) is highly underrated.

Novinha2005.01.25 - 08:21AM15: “Knowledge Is Power”Signed
Dearest,
I must admit that the ways woman's mind can travel are really appalling. "Improving her marriage", my! You portray a lost woman quite well. I can imagine this sort of denial quite easily. I just wish someone would hit both the 'adultresses' on their heads with something heavy and tell them they are being so stupid... Why doesn't Ginny get divorced? And Hermione?
All in all, you can congratulate yourself - it's not that often I get agitated about a story, not counting these few written by Fandom Giants like Hayseed.
I am looking forward to next chapters.
Greetings from Poland, Novinha

Novinha2005.01.25 - 08:18AM5: "Mirrors, Illusions and Reflections"Signed
It seems very promising so far. Nicely angsty, with a healthy share of Draco/Ginny, interesting characterisation and a dark post-war twist. I am a sucker for post-war darkfics ;-) And I can identify with your past-fear about never meeting someone special, so Hermione's problem is even more interesting for me. Sadly ;) So, it seems fit to send greetings for your Husband and Children, eh?
My only question is about the divorce thing - in one chapter Ginny tells Hermione that a witch who gave birth cannot get a divorce, and one or two chapters later Hermione wonders that she has never seen a pure-blood with divorced parents and thinks she should investigate it. Otherwise everything seems to fit.
Greetings from Poland,
Novinha,

Author's Response: Hermione will not just take Ginny's word on the matter, but will want to research the matter herself. She's just one of those, "I have to see it in print to believe it" sort of people. It's not that she doesn't beleive Ginny, but that she was trying to recall any information that might contradict Ginny's statement. Glad to see you are enjoying this fic and you think it's believable.

pickles2005.01.24 - 08:06PM15: “Knowledge Is Power”Signed
I believe you are correct. This story is going along very nicely. What does Lavender know? I know you can't tell me til its time. which is a total bummer... I enjoyed this chapter. A lot of information. Harry has just pushed Hermione in the direction that Snape/Malfoy want. Have a feeling she's going to get the info needed to clear their names just before they leave the country. who will they change into to leave the country? will Hermione be sent to Azkaban for giving "illegal ingredients"? did lavendar have a part in hermione's getting passed up in the jobs? is moody the reason? I'm sure i have a dozen more questions. Here's the chocolate you so deserve. Any favorite chocolates? Thank you for the update.

Britannia2005.01.24 - 07:17PM15: “Knowledge Is Power”Signed
Mean of Harry to give into Moody - but great chapter - I can't wait for more.

Jawy2005.01.24 - 07:00PM15: “Knowledge Is Power”Signed
Oh no! Lavender wants Ron so she's going to blackmail Hermione, isn't she? And I feel so bad for Ginny, stuck pretending that she can work things out with Harry. And Snape! And Draco! And Hermione! I can't take it any more!

Envinyatar2005.01.24 - 06:43PM15: “Knowledge Is Power”Signed
I just love this story. I can't wait for the next update... I really wonder what there is about Severus' wife. I hope we get to that part quickly... and I totally love that there is D/G in this story. I hope Ginny will leave Harry (okay, she may stay friends with him, but that's all) and live with Draco. They're perfect for one another... As are Hermione and Severus. I ask myself how Hermione will react when Severus reveals himself to her? She'll be surprised, for sure, and I guess she'll help them... (What sense would this story make, after all, if that weren't the case? :-) ) But which way? Thorugh Polyjuice, or will she find anything proving that Severus and Draco are innocents? Or both? By the way, it's really in character for Hermione to fight for both Severus and Draco... You idiot, Harry! I'd given you more credit to figure out the problem of Moody and Death Eaters. Just a quick note on an error you made in the A/N of the last chapter: It should be "behüten" (or "behueten", whatever you're able to type with your keyboard) instead of "behuten". German is my native tongue, so trust me on that ;-) ~Jules

queenp2005.01.24 - 06:36PM15: “Knowledge Is Power”Signed
How is she going to prove their innocence? She just must! If not, Severus will leave the country without her....NO, that cannot happen. Loving the story. Update again soon!!!!!!!!

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