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| rheniel | 2005.09.28 - 08:00PM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| I luff you. That was the best chapter of anything... ever. Author's Response: You luff me? I had no idea I was a sailing vessel. ;-) Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this chapter so much. | |||
| Risa | 2005.09.28 - 02:53PM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| if i offended you in my last review i have to apologize!
maybe my choice of words wasn't very lucky but be assured, i love that chapter the way it is.
the strange mood between snape and lavender after the pensive-incident is great and i wondered if he was only nervous because of the lack of his mask.
what happend between kingsley and lavender is really intereseting
could it be something completly harmless??
well, i wonder why hermione doesn't recognize the voice?!?
i mean even if she doesn't know where, she could knew she heard
it before, specially if the voice is so "trademark" like.
hermione is so torn , i like that she can't decide between "calleo" and her marriage, even though she isn't anyway near happiness with her husband.
oh sweet denial. how many black haired guys with a prominent nose, a "knack" for potions and such a voice she's met in her life?!?
well, you really got me on the hook with shacklebolt now, i am so curious.
what a way to let her realise who he is!!!
the irritation of lavender is marvelous, they interacted so well!
the whole mood is just so tense and yet they "solved" everything keen minded.
hermione is so wonderfull uncertain know but i've got the strange feeling, that she's heading stright to an depression if nothing happens.
what if ron finds the book, i just can't imagine him taking such a thing lightly.
awww, severus is so cute in his nervousness.
i really love that that trevor guy - he is a really good lough!!
"lovely bunch of coconuts" good god that's great, i hope this time was no reporter there to witness!
till next time risa
Author's Response: There has only been one review that has offended me, and it wasn't yours. That particular review called Ginny a slutty skank and Harry and Ron a couple of cuckholding queers after "skimming" a few chapters. Hmmm, yes what is up with Lavender and Kingsley? Just wait and see. Hermione didn't recognize Snape's voice because she's used to hearing him bark orders and be nasty, not talk sweetly and warmly towards her. Yes, poor Hermione is quite confused right now. She has a lot to come to terms with right now. So many things I want to say in response to your review, but I can't. Thank you for your wonderful review. | |||
| mistaria | 2005.09.28 - 12:38AM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| Probably one of the best chapters yet! As always it was very well written, praise to betas and natural talents! ^^ Cant wait for the next installment. Author's Response: Kindest thanks! I'm still working on chapter 42, but I'm writing as fast as I can. | |||
| MollysSister | 2005.09.27 - 04:13PM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| Ms. Betz- I stayed up way past my bed time last night to read your newest chapter. Husband had to install something on the computer first blah blah blah. I am not complaining the chapter was well worth it. I felt myself twisting inside when H ran into the bathroom to cry rather than to face Snape. He was being kind and sympathetic something she just couldnt not accept from him. Oh the pain this woman is in.
I find it amusing that Servus cannot see why he behaves the way he does around H. I think he is a better man when he is with H. He is rising to meet her in his mannors and his compasion. It is such a sweet thing so see him struggle with this. Write on my dear. Author's Response: Poor Hermione could not fathom flinging herself into Snape's arms when she was sure the gig was up. At least Severus is willing to play along for a little while longer. Yeah, Severus is a bit confused. He's never been in love before and it's a bit odd for him. I am writing as fast as I can. | |||
| InsanePirate624 | 2005.09.26 - 08:54PM | 16: “In the Heat of the Night” | Signed |
| omg i'm desperate for the next thursday night... Author's Response: Desperate...but not serious? Sorry, flashes of Severus done up as Adam Ant flashed before my eyes and I was left dazed and drooling. Hmm, tight pants... Sorry! | |||
| Lamesburg | 2005.09.26 - 07:40PM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| its funny that severus is imagining hermione touching herself for his voyeuristic pleasure.....as we watch him touch himself for ours....can you write an entire chapter about him testing these potions pleeeeaaaase?!?!! Author's Response: Hmmm, a PWP sub-chapter on Severus wanking? HOW CAN I RESIST? Tempting, very tempting, but don't worry, the lemons are coming, and it will be a bumper crop! | |||
| Zhaneraal | 2005.09.26 - 03:15PM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| Goodness! You just want them to scream "take me, take me now!" fall into each others arms and copulate vigorously just so it's out of their systems. Elephant indeed! Author's Response: Is that what you want Hermione to scream to Severus? Hmmm, I'll take it under advisement. | |||
| Maya | 2005.09.26 - 04:10AM | 42: “Illusion Is the First of All Pleasures” or “Elephant? What Elephant?” | Signed |
| So, like you suggested, I took my passport, and I crossed the borderline of madness. Ohhh! the magic world you give to me on this side :) How pleasant it is to read someone with such a quality in descriptives scenes. I just cannot make myself think that your story will end one day, all too soon. I am waiting for the day Hermione will call him Severus, and no more Snape, because this will be the day she can see him like a man, and no more the "bigbadbat". And, I am only a romantic woman, so I crave to see the first kiss between the two of them (ahem, in fact I wait for more than a kiss, but will take what you give to us). Also I would like to apologize for my very bad english and my gramatical mistakes, as it is not my native language, I can read it pretty well, but am a dumb when it comes to write it. Author's Response: Your English is good enough so that I could not tell that you are not a native speaker. Glad you took my advice. Did you have fun on your trip? Hermione will call him Severus one day. That will be an important day (hint, hint). Thanks for your wonderful review. | |||
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