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| sapphiretragedy | 2005.04.29 - 10:56PM | 22: "Catch Me If I Fall" or "In Vino Veritas" | Signed |
| Great chapter. I loved it. Totally worth the wait. I want to kill Ron, or just kick him in the nuts a few times -- I hope he gets what he deserves soon! Author's Response: Ron is just an example of how nice people can turn nasty in bad relationships. | |||
| cocoachristy | 2005.04.29 - 10:42PM | 22: "Catch Me If I Fall" or "In Vino Veritas" | Signed |
| Great chapter Betz!!! I like what Hemione did, including Ginny and Harry in the counseling. Now if those two (gin and harry + hermione and ron) split, someone will know there are problems. I hope when she gets calleo's letters she recognizes the handwriting and calls him on it so we can see some *action!* LOL with the client and handing her to Blaise! Good job! Author's Response: Thank you, okon! Yeah, I like how Hermione laid it onthe line with Harry and GInny as witnesses to the whole thing. Let's them know just what a prick Ron can be at times instead ofhearing it second hand from Hermione. More on Calleo in chpater 24. | |||
| FeyinBetween | 2005.04.29 - 10:36PM | 22: "Catch Me If I Fall" or "In Vino Veritas" | Signed |
| Oh my god, that's the funniest thing I have ever heard. I almost died laughing.
Finally Hermione gives Ron the ultimatum. It was a rather Slytherin thing of her to think, but good for her. She's deserved the right.
I really like the way the story is progressing and how it's very obvious you put so much effort into each chapter. Author's Response: Yeah, it is pretty funny. Imagine how hard I laughed when I found that little sound effect. Hermione is just fed up to her lower lip with Ron's shit. Thanks for your priase. | |||
| Kismet | 2005.04.29 - 10:28PM | 22: "Catch Me If I Fall" or "In Vino Veritas" | Signed |
| I'm hoping Ron will call her bluff and say he'll take the divorce rather than counseling. Hrm, and Ron was at "a friend's" place? I'm guessing it was a female friend. Ooh, does Ron have Quidditch groupies? Is he a cheating bastard? And will he be there when Calleo's owl arrives and will he read her mail? Looking forward to figuring all this out! Author's Response: We'll see later how counseling goes, that's if Ron even goes. All good questions that will be answered in time. | |||
| SNycoleCalvert | 2005.04.29 - 05:20PM | 21: “Twenty Questions” | Signed |
| much love on this chapter, you have got to keep going and update more... i won't take no for an answer..... Amazing! Sincerely, Syntera | |||
| Moyra | 2005.04.29 - 03:23AM | 21: “Twenty Questions” | Signed |
| Very thrilling, I trembled with S. in the verge of the interrogation with “His-Nastiness-Himself-And-greatest-Arse-Moody” and I’m very glad that the deception went so well. How did Draco manage to overlive the whole ordeal? Surely, he had another way to come around. Will we see the talk between R&H the next time? And will we see some conscious resolution of H. to help Severus and Draco? Author's Response: It gets even more interesting next chapter when Hermione talks with Ron. Draco and Severus will talk about how Draco got by in passing in a later chapter, like ch27, as Severus and Draco had that conversation on that Friday away form reader's eyes back at H.Q., but they will rehash it later on in a conversation you readers will be privy to. Unfortunately, Hermione will not realize who Severus is for a little while longer and Severus will ahve his own reason to wait to tell Hermione. Thanks for all you reviews so far, they've been lovely. | |||
| slythergirl | 2005.04.28 - 07:58PM | 21: “Twenty Questions” | Signed |
| Your story is weaving together so nicely. Please keep writing. I would love to see Hermonie get divorced since it is obvious that she and Ron don't connect on any level, any longer. The relationships between all characters are written well. Please continue this. I will be waiting! Author's Response: Thank you! I will keep writing, as this will be one loooong story. Good news for you, I'm posting chapter 22 right after I'm done with my response with you, so it should be up soon, depending on the validation queue. | |||
| Jana | 2005.04.28 - 05:12PM | 21: “Twenty Questions” | Signed |
| Ooh. More soon please, and make it a bit lemony? Wait, not an order. Do what you like then. Author's Response: Sorry, this is citrus free zone till chapter 23. But more is on the way soon. | |||
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