Reviews for And They Didn't Live Happily Ever After
| pickles | 2004.11.18 - 03:01AM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Anonymous |
| good 2 chapters...thank you for updating. |
| Horserider | 2004.11.17 - 07:30PM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Anonymous |
| Well, you're doing a damn fine job, I'd say. I was guessing after reading the dialogue that it was Draco! Do both our Slytherins solemnly swear that they are up to no good? I hope so, because I'd say Hermione is needin' some Snape-style lovin' soon...;) Fix them Legos and get back to typing, I'm begging you! ~HR |
| Artemis | 2004.11.17 - 07:13PM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Anonymous |
| AWESOME chapter. VERY well done lemon. EXCELLENT BDSM! I can't wait to see how you tie everything together! Update soon! This is one of the best fics out there! |
| RachelW | 2004.11.17 - 06:21PM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Anonymous |
| Wow, this is a really different take on the Gigolo challenge, very, very nice too. Angst and Drama and all that. I was so worried before the mystery man removed his cloak! And yes, writing with little kids running around is difficult. Most of my writing gets done late, late at night when they're in bed.
Oh, I noticed one error, you used "you're" where it should have been "your". Other than that, it looks great.
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| June | 2004.11.17 - 05:15PM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Anonymous |
| Ahhhhh...DRACO! Much relieved to see Draco and Ginny together, rather than Snape and Ginny. I'm sorry Hermione and the other Order members didn't stick up for Draco and Snape after the war; makes me feel very sorry for even the old Death Eaters, forced to become beggars. They couldn't just leave the country? I sure hope there's a way Ginny and Hermione can get divorced easily;maybe Ginny is saving up her household allowance and sending it to a Swiss bank account. I hope Hermione is smart enough to not force Ginny to give up her happiness, since Hermione herself knows what it's like to be miserable in wedlock. (Hermione and Ron...EWWW!) Hermione didn't swear a wizard's oath to Harry, did she? Must know more - please update! Tell the kids to feed themselves! |
| Piggie | 2004.11.17 - 05:01PM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Signed |
| wow - i'm utterly speachless - except, PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! |
| Lana Manckir | 2004.11.17 - 02:53PM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Anonymous |
| I know what you mean girl, I have a 4 year old and a 2 year old on my hands 24/7 and I have no clue how I manage to get chapters done. Anyway, wonderfully written chapter, you got me going there and I thought it was Severus until the last moment. Good thing it wasn't, I feel somewhat relieved with that and hope Hermione will decided to take a walk on the wild side too and who knows.. find an ex-DE for herself ;-) update soon! |
| Aurealis | 2004.11.17 - 01:13PM | 3: "Sua Cuique Voluptas" (Everyone Has His Own Pleasures) | Anonymous |
| That was well done. The tenderness, at the end, between Draco and Ginny was nice. I'm still not sure why she didn't ditch Harry beforehand, but I guess you'll explain that eventually. |
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