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| DRoy234282 | 2016.08.20 - 05:57PM | 90: “The Maenad and the Satyr” | Signed |
| Wait a minute. This was just Chapter 90, so you must have revised the numbering of your chapters, if another appearance of Alan is yet to come (you said chapter 88). Sorry to be picky, I just want to keep a close eye on that scoundrel! :-) Author's Response: I just posted chapter 84. Some of the earlier chapters are split due to the 10,000 word limit, so some chapters are two parters, which explains why the numbers don't match. Look to the summaries and the chapter numbers at the top of the page for true chapter numbers. Next chapter to post will be chapter 85. | |||
| DRoy234282 | 2016.08.20 - 05:53PM | 90: “The Maenad and the Satyr” | Signed |
| As the story unfolds, I love how it has introduced and deepened our knowledge of new characters, as well as the Hawiian language and customs. I particularly liked the appearance of the Goddess and her protection of Severus and Moulka. Something else I have noticed is that you never seem to pointlessly bring in a character, which gives me more of the creeps about a reappearance of Alan. As before, I sincerely hope that any future threats of harm from him are nipped in the bud (or even before). Furthermore, I hope that he is dealt with in such a way, as to stop any and all future problems with him. I see that he reappears in Ch. 88, so I hope that this will truly be the end of his part in this story. I sometimes wonder how long it will be before our lovers finally reconnect. I hope it is soon! Kudos for a brilliant Chapter! Author's Response: Thank you. Mounga serves as a Albus-type figure. Severus has always gravitated to the most powerful wizard in a society. Once it was Voldemort, but then it was Albus. In this new community, it is Mounga. Also, Mounga is the one who is trying to show Severus that it is possible to have a good life with a loving wife and good kids, so easing him into accepting (and not rejecting) the concept of a normal and fulfilling life. | |||
| Rema | 2016.08.20 - 06:48AM | 90: “The Maenad and the Satyr” | Signed |
| So near yet so far.And what´s up with Alan? Great update. Author's Response: Yes, what is up with Alan? More of him in Chapter 88. | |||
| jenn | 2016.08.15 - 01:22AM | 89: “Never Provoke a Friendly Slytherin” | Signed |
| I swear, if a drunk wizard optioned gets her into bed, I am going to be pissed.
While I love that Hermione gets her Severus fix... I want some relief for Severus. Preferably with Hermione's hot ... You know.
And when do we find out about those leathery lemons?? What has the mischievous Machiavelli Dumberdore done now??? Couldn't just leave a will, nooooooooo.
And the serial killer..... Has Mad eye finally spring a loose bolt?? That wouldn't surprise me. Author's Response: So much to say that I can't, but will be answered soon-ish. | |||
| paddiew | 2016.08.12 - 04:39PM | 89: “Never Provoke a Friendly Slytherin” | Signed |
| Great updates. I love the new life/friends in Hawaii. " two hallucinations/ghostly images" has me veerry curious. What else do you have brewing?...always a surprise. Thank you Author's Response: Thanks, more on the way very soon. | |||
| Kittens | 2016.08.11 - 09:57PM | 31: “Thou Art Fishified” | Signed |
| Seduced by a salacious salad.....
That was a gold line. Nobody is going to forget that in a hurry Author's Response: Thanks, yeah, that is one of the more quotable lines people pick. | |||
| loreen77 | 2016.08.07 - 08:08AM | 89: “Never Provoke a Friendly Slytherin” | Signed |
| Loved it. Friday drinks sound like a great idea, too bad I work every Saturday and couldn't do that. I like how the story is progressing. Author's Response: Thanks. And you could always do Saturday drinks out, if you don't work Sunday though. | |||
| mele | 2016.08.06 - 01:35PM | 89: “Never Provoke a Friendly Slytherin” | Signed |
| I wondered how hermione would get her Severus fix, very clever! Friday drinks - have you ever heard the song " it's aloha Friday"? It's a very playful song sung every Friday on the radio and at bars in Hawaii.
Author's Response: No, I haven't! I'll have to go find it on YouTube now and listen to it. Thanks for the tip! Yep, Hermione has to do something to get her Severus fix in. | |||
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