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queenp2005.11.24 - 08:24PM46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake”Signed
a most wonderful chapter...I liked that Severus was discreet in handling Hermione's female problems. I also like that he immediately began researching a better product for the market...I enjoy watching the interactions between Severus and HErmione and I cannot wait to see the unmasking. I want more, soon...I hope Hermione decides that Ron isn't worth her effort and time any more. I hope Severus is appropriatly sympathetic to the situation. I hope everyone (read Hermione, Severus, Draco, and Ginny) will end up happy together on some deserted island where no one will bother them. (Wait a minute that's what I want for me...scratch the deserted island...)I hope that you update again soon! Mas, por favor!!

Author's Response: Yes, it's nice when men can be mature about instead of running away screaming with their fingers in their ears going , "LA! LA! LA! LA! LA!" Lots of hoping. You'll just have to wait and see. More is on the way soon.

Bouncing_Ferret2005.11.24 - 07:56PM46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake”Signed
Lovely chapter as always

Author's Response: Thank you.

LariLee2005.11.24 - 07:46PM46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake”Signed
A wonderful chapter and the research you put in on this is amazing! You know, all I want for Christmas is the lemons chapter. Okay, I want other things as well, but it would make me very happy!
~Lisa

Author's Response: Kindest thanks. Santa just may grant your Christmas wish, let's see how fast I can type.

Elayne2005.11.24 - 06:17PM46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake”Signed
I want a mirror like Snapes! That was so cool! I'm glad you put 2 meetings in 1 chapter. Can't wait for the spa scene. They can get naked and have some fun in the sauna! Snape knows she's going to be there, and there was mention made of a surprise he was planning....SQUEE!!! And I don't squee. Seriously, Betz, this story is amazing and suspensful and a real nail biter. What chapter is Part 2 going to start on? How do I get on your chapter update email list? I love men who are sensitive to Aunt Flo. Severus was being so thoughtful, having Marf take care of Hermione so she wouldn't get embarrassed. I wish he was allowed to make potions again, because I could sure use some of his PMS potion. When he invents it, that is. UGH! I just wish she would dump Ron already and give herself permission to be happy! This is so complicated. Happy writing!

Author's Response: Yes, I want a mirror like Snape's too. Well, the spa scene will be coming up soon, and I'll be posting to the queue soon. Act I will be coming to a close soon. You'll know when it happens. You can email me through the "contact the author" link and I'll add you to the update email list. Thanks.

Antagonist Len2005.11.24 - 06:12PM46: “The Best Friend Is The One Who In Wishing Me Well Wishes It For My Sake”Signed
Liked the title a lot, my thanks to GinnyW. The chapter was nice. But it really felt slow. There's been so many chapters like this already, nice for building up tension until, finally! But it's getting tiring. I found the notes in the end more interesting... At least, I hope, this will be the last to drag?

Author's Response: Yeah, things go fast, then slow, then fast, then slow...Hermione needs a little quiet quality time with Severus cause things will be changing very soon. I've wanted to show that Severus will be there for Hermione in sickness and in health. I know, it should be a little faster, but these little bits are not just randomly thrown in there to fill up space, each little bit will serve its purpose and come back up in later chapters.

Datura2005.11.24 - 03:59PM45: “Sexy Dress, Sexless Night”Signed
Alls I have to say is you are mean for dragging it out so long i dont get to see the end yet *pouts* write fast

Author's Response: Things will pick up soon. I'm writing as fast as I can.

sully22005.11.22 - 11:06PM45: “Sexy Dress, Sexless Night”Signed
Eleven more days? And just how many more chapters does that translate too? :) You are the Queen of Anticipation (and evil cliff hangers). At least I had the treat of 2 chapters after I finished up with school. I love Hermione's dress and that she and Ginny were a little drunk at the dress shop--LOL. I think it is just like the Ron you have portrayed to be angry about the dress. If he was taking care of business back home, he would not be so worried about others looking at her. Please update soon (2 chapters would be nice). :)

Author's Response: LOL! Yes, Ron is not really paying much mind to Hermione lately. Let's see. The anniversary dinner will be in chapter 47...chapter 45 is in the queue right now and chapter 46 jsut went off to my betas. I'm about to start writing chapter 47 after Thanksgiving is over - I have a lot of cooking and baking to do.

Datura2005.11.21 - 11:30PM39: “The Edge of Sanity”Signed
i havent even read the whole chapter yet but i had to say this before i forgot it, you are going to have her work at WWW in another country with snape as her lover... anyways you have an awesome story but you are so cruel for taunting people, im just glad i had 45 chapters to begin with *her smile fades into a glare as she says 'she better know who he is before i get done, and no cliffies at 45 or else!' and waves her fist at you through the loop her arm makes because her other hand is covering her face GEEK STYLE!*

Author's Response: Better know who Calleo is by the end of this chapter? Well, by the time you read this, your curiostiy will be saisfied. I like your theory of where this story will go, but we'll have to wait and see if it comes to pass. Thanks for reading.

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