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Winna2005.03.10 - 11:56AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
OK, I'm probably way off base here, but something occurred to me when Lavender mentioned her man problems. She was probably referring to the nearing departure of Snape and Draco, but something made me think that she knew about Ron's whereabouts. I wonder if he's seeing a prostitute under Lavender's employ. Like I said, I'm probably way off base, but still... Looking forward to updates!

queenp2005.03.10 - 11:33AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
I wonder what Ginny told Severus...Can't wait to see what will happen next...As I've got to go and don't have time for proper review--Betz, I love this story. Please update again soon!

pickles2005.03.10 - 11:11AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
thank you for a new chapter to read. it was wonderful. seems like the potion master would like to take mione with him. it seems so bizarre to think of her as mrs weasley. especially since the one that keeps popping up in my brain is the mother in law. will ginny be sympathetic towards mione? will mione tell her the truth. keep writing wonderful stories. patty

peri2005.03.10 - 11:10AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Great chapter. You've already got all these people hiding secrets from each other and this chapter makes me feel like it's going to get even more involved. I have visions of Hermione knowing who Snape is and hiding it from him, while he's trying to "hint" to her.

LariLee2005.03.10 - 09:45AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Another superb chapter! Though I must admit, I'm wondering where Ron is... I'm hoping it's at the bottom of the Thames. :-) I do think poor Severus is smitten.
~Lisa

Author's Response: Ron will return...unfortunately. Of course Severus is smitten, though he'll deny it till he's grey...or so he thinks.

Armor2005.03.10 - 09:29AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
This chapter was too powerful. Very good. I love the idea of Severus having a chat with 'Minerva' and 'Albus' ;) very funny. Though, there were some drama with Hermione. The bright end was a good point for me (hell, I hope Hermione and Severus will flee together) Udpate soon

AngelQueen2005.03.10 - 09:00AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Hm... well, we know that Ginny knows where Hermione will be the following evening. And Lavender is still really a bit of a puzzle for me. There just something about her that screams there is something we still don't know. Fun fun fun! I really loved the whole 'conversation' Severus had with the mentalghost!AlbusandMinerva. It was funny on one level, and yet still touching on another. Within the confines of his own mind and heart-yes, we all know he has one *wink*-they are both still with him. And as to what killed them, my money is still on one particular person... *growls* And the attraction grows! Woo! Wonderful chapter, Betz! Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Of course Ginny has to say something, even if she knows Hermione doesn't know she knows. And I just had to have Albus and Minerva in this fic, even though they are dead. Albus was Severus' conscience for years and he's still there, even though he's gone. And what would we do without Minerva to irk Severus at times? Seveus can deny his growing attraction to Hermione, but deep down he knows better, though he won't admit it.

hpfanfic2005.03.10 - 08:58AM18: “The Inner HungerSigned
Very nice installment.

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